Love is in the Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Life is a Painting"Love poems and sweet nothings
7 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and your mental image was great. I liked your idea about life as a painting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and your mental image was great. I liked your idea about life as a painting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Jessi.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Goodness, but you are a talent. Not only wiring about painting is life, but actually painting ideas in our minds with your wonderful words.
Fun. Keep at it!
D
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Goodness, but you are a talent. Not only wiring about painting is life, but actually painting ideas in our minds with your wonderful words.
Fun. Keep at it!
D
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Doug, for such encouraging remarks.
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
Beautiful 5-7-5, Ginda. I absolutely adore the line "brush strokes of passion."
You've packed lovely imagery in this brevity, and I enjoyed it very much!
Xo
Jess
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Beautiful 5-7-5, Ginda. I absolutely adore the line "brush strokes of passion."
You've packed lovely imagery in this brevity, and I enjoyed it very much!
Xo
Jess
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Jessica.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely 5-7-5 poem Ginda. You've used the art of the artist to describe the portrait of a life. Sometimes passionate bushstrokes sometimes sketches - love that. Sorry I have used all of my sixes.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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A lovely 5-7-5 poem Ginda. You've used the art of the artist to describe the portrait of a life. Sometimes passionate bushstrokes sometimes sketches - love that. Sorry I have used all of my sixes.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Valda, I appreciate your words of praise, even without the extra star.
Comment from Wendy G
That is very beautiful, Ginda, the words and the painting alike. The more one reflects about it, the more it seems true. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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That is very beautiful, Ginda, the words and the painting alike. The more one reflects about it, the more it seems true. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Wendy. We do paint our life's portrait with our words and our actions.
Comment from Gunner Lil
Wow! A great short poem that you wrote and should be proud of.
A wonderful picture also.
It may be short but powerful.
An easy read!
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Wow! A great short poem that you wrote and should be proud of.
A wonderful picture also.
It may be short but powerful.
An easy read!
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Gunner.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Life is a Painting, has the proper formatting and suggests the artist must and does project his/her life through an appendage to the canvas.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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This 5-7-5, Life is a Painting, has the proper formatting and suggests the artist must and does project his/her life through an appendage to the canvas.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Bill.