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Snug and

5-7-5 romance

5 total reviews 
Comment from rhonnie69
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

"Ahhh...Sophisticated lady. May Plato flip over in his grave. ha ha ha...I have imagined that he's gonna rise up and come to you and request a temperate explanation of your admitting cheating on him here. He's extremely jealous...ya know. However...I do believe that if all that guy ever gets out of you is, ( like you said )a warm comfy hug...I guess Plato will be cool with that. ha ha ha. Miss pretty witty, you got an exuberant chortle out of me with this one. More. More. Encore. Encore."

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
    Ciao Rhonnie!

    I was just fooling about, fan members seem to love a classic romance poem where the man makes her lass feel she?s his queen.

    But it?s all made up, 😝

    Thanks for the shiny six stars!
reply by rhonnie69 on 13-Apr-2024
reply by rhonnie69 on 13-Apr-2024
    WOW! You were just fooling. You made it all up. I'd been holding my breath until I heard you say that. Now...I can exhale. Oh...eh...by the way. I like your pic of your little sunflower face with your wagging tongue. When I was a young boy...if a girl poked her tongue at a boy that was her way of telling him: "I like you lots and you are the hots." In other words: Tongue pokin' was young jokin'. for, "I luv U."
    So...here's tongue pokin' and young jokin' right back at ya.
Comment from SimianSavant
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

The site ate my review. Your piece might have had my vote in the contest if I had not been competing against you with a luscious banana haiku, but clearly you didn't need my vote to win this one! Nice color scheme and rhyming schematic. This one surely had the vote of all the ladies in the house. Well done Tempeste.

SS

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    That banana brulee of yours made my mouth water.

    Thanks for the kind words, the support, and the six shiny stars.

    Keep safe!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Excellent
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Ohhh my goodness! This one has snagged my heart, and my vote. Absolutely adorable, both the delightful words as well as the intoxicating picture of young love. VERY well done, Mystery Contestant. Good luck to you in the contest. xo

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

Comment from kiwisteveh
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Let's branch out and award six stars (a rare accolade for a 5-7-5) for the lovely construction which includes a tri[le rhyme and a well-matched photo.

This should do well in the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    With a top notch review and score like these, I feel already a winner. ( biggrin)

    The pic took two hours to find .. I wanted it to depict exactly my words .

    Thank you !
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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This is a romantic and magical time in life when lovers first find that love is full of fun and closeness and you brought all these passionate feelings in just a few words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    Yes, it?s a magical time,
    sadly though, many learn far too soon that making a relationship work/ last , involves also hard work;

    Everyone must be willing to make sacrifices and compromise.

    Too many give up on their love when money issues arise or character differences come to the surface.

    Thanks for posting a review!