2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "** Tangerine Dream **".
4 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very fluid. The words you chose, hazy, wind and breezy all are vaporous. There is no definite beginning or end. It is dream like. This was beautiful and ethereal. Loved it. Picture was fabulous. Gretchen
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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This was very fluid. The words you chose, hazy, wind and breezy all are vaporous. There is no definite beginning or end. It is dream like. This was beautiful and ethereal. Loved it. Picture was fabulous. Gretchen
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen, I appreciate the excellent five stars review and kind words.
gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
that dress looks like really long red hair lol
i like how you divided the pic with the poem in-between
nice imagery and smooth flow through the tercets
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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that dress looks like really long red hair lol
i like how you divided the pic with the poem in-between
nice imagery and smooth flow through the tercets
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
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Comment from hullabaloo22
I was intrigued to read this poem as I recognised the name of the German band. What beautiful writing, and what a fantastic personification of the wind and the scents it brings. Lovely illustration too.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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I was intrigued to read this poem as I recognised the name of the German band. What beautiful writing, and what a fantastic personification of the wind and the scents it brings. Lovely illustration too.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, hullabaloo22. My daughter was called that through high-school (*÷*)
Thank you very much, my friend
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Comment from royowen
Some people know how to apply scent, the one that suits them, not only that but girls who know how to modestly apply make. I Think that dear girls should be loved and taught to love themselves, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Some people know how to apply scent, the one that suits them, not only that but girls who know how to modestly apply make. I Think that dear girls should be loved and taught to love themselves, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
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Most welcome