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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This is a beautiful piece of artwork that matches the words well. Sometimes we do miss the best things when we reach for something to hard.
Congrats on placing third in the conest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Hi MariVal,
This is a beautiful piece of artwork that matches the words well. Sometimes we do miss the best things when we reach for something to hard.
Congrats on placing third in the conest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from rspoet
Hello Gypsy,
This is a marvelous lune poem for the contest,
one of the best I've read on the site.
The connection of the lines and the imagery
along with the gentle shift in the last line
sets it apart from the others.
The visual impact is also splendid.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Hello Gypsy,
This is a marvelous lune poem for the contest,
one of the best I've read on the site.
The connection of the lines and the imagery
along with the gentle shift in the last line
sets it apart from the others.
The visual impact is also splendid.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Robert, it's good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind feedback and exceptional s review. May you have a wonderful weekend.
ix-star
Gypsy hugs
Comment from jessizero
This was a beautiful short poem. I love your thought about losing sight of the stars in the eyes of your loved one. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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This was a beautiful short poem. I love your thought about losing sight of the stars in the eyes of your loved one. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Jessi, it's good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind feedback and excellent review. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Esther Brown
Loved the picture and the poem. You are very gifted. I enjoy your imagery. The art is compelling and beautiful perfectly matching the sentiment expressed. Great job. Esther
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Loved the picture and the poem. You are very gifted. I enjoy your imagery. The art is compelling and beautiful perfectly matching the sentiment expressed. Great job. Esther
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Esther, it's good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind feedback and excellent review. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Boogienights
This is fantastic. You followed the rules and created a great lune with a lovely picture and theme. I really like this, a terrific contest entry....best of luck.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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This is fantastic. You followed the rules and created a great lune with a lovely picture and theme. I really like this, a terrific contest entry....best of luck.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a good lune with a good topic.
-The images describe the nature of a relationship.
-One person is expecting too much and
as a result, didn't pay attention to the
stars in the partner's eyes.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a good lune with a good topic.
-The images describe the nature of a relationship.
-One person is expecting too much and
as a result, didn't pay attention to the
stars in the partner's eyes.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Pam
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh, oh, oh, oh, OHHH!!! This is SOOO GOOD, Gypsy Rose!! I LOVE this. It made me stop and ask myself if I'm guilty of this, as well. (maybe a little, I decided. So now I can re-assess a way to stop.) Thank you for this deep, HELPFUL, wise and excellent poem!! I'm bookcasing it so it's never far from my consciousness. And best of luck in the Lune Poetry Contest!! xo
xoxox
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Oh, oh, oh, oh, OHHH!!! This is SOOO GOOD, Gypsy Rose!! I LOVE this. It made me stop and ask myself if I'm guilty of this, as well. (maybe a little, I decided. So now I can re-assess a way to stop.) Thank you for this deep, HELPFUL, wise and excellent poem!! I'm bookcasing it so it's never far from my consciousness. And best of luck in the Lune Poetry Contest!! xo
xoxox
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle
Gypsy hugs
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xo
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Nice entry for this Lune contest. Your illustration is a great companion to your few words.
Good connection you created between stars and moon. Those starry eyes get us each time (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Gypsy,
Nice entry for this Lune contest. Your illustration is a great companion to your few words.
Good connection you created between stars and moon. Those starry eyes get us each time (-;
Mark
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from teafor2
Gypsy, an overreaching or ambitious quest seem to have sidetracked an
otherwise budding romance, or this could be the imagination of a creative
wordsmith with a skill set to pen a viable entry for said contest. In either
case, good luck. teafor2
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Gypsy, an overreaching or ambitious quest seem to have sidetracked an
otherwise budding romance, or this could be the imagination of a creative
wordsmith with a skill set to pen a viable entry for said contest. In either
case, good luck. teafor2
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and kind words, teafor2
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. It does seem those who reach for the moon tend to lose sight of all that's really important in life. I enjoyed this entire presentation. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. It does seem those who reach for the moon tend to lose sight of all that's really important in life. I enjoyed this entire presentation. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and kind words, Barbara
Gypsy hugs