Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You did an excellent job describing the emotion of love lost in this poem and the color worked great to for showing this emotion. Although, I am absolutely positive nobody could ever forget you.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Barbara

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

awesome imagery of love ending. . .
heart-breaking - yet thought-provoking
love the second pic searching outside the window...
nice colours and a smooth flow of descriptive word choices

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

The end of a relationship is always hard no matter the reason, it takes time to move on and to become ourselves again, with enough confidence to try again, beautifully written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024

Thank you very much, kym

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Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

And very well written, reverse for your presentation is great. I wish you a very good week and I also wish you Godspeed in all that you do. Patricia .

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024

Thank you very much, Patricia.

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