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Comment from jessizero
I agree with your author's notes - "Politics Yuck!!" That pretty much sums it up.
You got the rhyme as was required, and I think you did it very well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I agree with your author's notes - "Politics Yuck!!" That pretty much sums it up.
You got the rhyme as was required, and I think you did it very well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad I never tried journalism.
Comment from kahpot
"what is the fuss is all about" this line may need to be looked at, as it did interrupt the wonderful flow of your work, yes, when asking/voting for a leader we are quite restricted, a wonderful read, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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"what is the fuss is all about" this line may need to be looked at, as it did interrupt the wonderful flow of your work, yes, when asking/voting for a leader we are quite restricted, a wonderful read, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thanks for the pointer. I thought of changing the line, but instead, have deleted the second 'is', which should not have been there and added a question mark.