Abandon
never to leave nor forsake2 total reviews
Comment from CornishChick
Ok. Second poem penned by you that I've read today. Your poems make me think. I'm still trying to decide if that's a good thing! Your poems remind me of Emily Dickenson... her poems drove me nuts and yet stayed with me. That's how I feel about yours. They are complex and the reader must chew on them for some time to get all the meat out of the meaning. I like challenges, so I guess that is a good thing!
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Ok. Second poem penned by you that I've read today. Your poems make me think. I'm still trying to decide if that's a good thing! Your poems remind me of Emily Dickenson... her poems drove me nuts and yet stayed with me. That's how I feel about yours. They are complex and the reader must chew on them for some time to get all the meat out of the meaning. I like challenges, so I guess that is a good thing!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed how your poem shares the theme of faith and our relationship with God. I loved the metaphor of a shepherd and their flock. This is a beautiful poem! Well done!
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I enjoyed how your poem shares the theme of faith and our relationship with God. I loved the metaphor of a shepherd and their flock. This is a beautiful poem! Well done!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024