2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Wondrous Things to See".
13 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Another wonderful free verse, I really like you have described the way He provides, as what we need is never exactly what we want, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Another wonderful free verse, I really like you have described the way He provides, as what we need is never exactly what we want, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
I love this, Marival. It is easily understood as you relate it to how we are cared for by the love of God and how nature truly does tie into it. I also love your account that we are given what we need and not always what we want and if course your beautiful presentation and everything about this one. Debi
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I love this, Marival. It is easily understood as you relate it to how we are cared for by the love of God and how nature truly does tie into it. I also love your account that we are given what we need and not always what we want and if course your beautiful presentation and everything about this one. Debi
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Debi.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Esther Brown
That was beautiful! Good poem for Easter. Our amazing Abba provides all we need always when we are being good kids. I still struggle sometimes with being a brat and still wanting Him to provide. Esther
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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That was beautiful! Good poem for Easter. Our amazing Abba provides all we need always when we are being good kids. I still struggle sometimes with being a brat and still wanting Him to provide. Esther
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I never heard God described as 'Abba' I like to learn about different religions. I think all have the same idea, God is Love. My church is called, Unity, it welcomes people from all faiths.
Thank you very much, Esther.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Heather Knight
This is definitely a six, but I don't have any left.
You keep on outdoing yourself, Marival.
In my opinion you deserve to be famous, but there's so much competition nowadays...
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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This is definitely a six, but I don't have any left.
You keep on outdoing yourself, Marival.
In my opinion you deserve to be famous, but there's so much competition nowadays...
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Hola, guapa,
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I don't have time to be famous lol. I watch my grandson full time since he was born.
Have a fabulous weekend!
Besitos y abrazos
MariVal
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LOL! JK Rowling was a single mother when she wrote Harry Potter and your poems are spectacular.
Anyway, a grandson is better than fame.x
Comment from Baltimore Born
The first two lines of the poem starts strong. Good personification in the poem. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Your last line is very true, God does supply our needs. Nice accentuating picture.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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The first two lines of the poem starts strong. Good personification in the poem. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Your last line is very true, God does supply our needs. Nice accentuating picture.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, God is all we need. We often don't realize that, but He is. I have felt His strong, comforting arms around me at times in my life when I didn't think is could continue, because the pain was so strong, but God was there. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Yes, God is all we need. We often don't realize that, but He is. I have felt His strong, comforting arms around me at times in my life when I didn't think is could continue, because the pain was so strong, but God was there. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
I have the same feelings. God has been with me through thick and thin. Many times it was just him.
Love
Marival
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
cool, comforting pic!
relaxing, restful free verse with smooth flow
i like the nature side... nice imagery and quite calming...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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cool, comforting pic!
relaxing, restful free verse with smooth flow
i like the nature side... nice imagery and quite calming...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This morning, I was reading a forward which was posted. A man had noticed a snake that was in the fire, burning, so he tried to pick it up and got bit. It dropped down in the fire again. He then got a piece of metal and went to pick it up again. Someone was nearby and noticed what he was trying to do. He loved nature so much that the snake was not going to die. I'm sure God was watching Him. Nature is a wonderful thing God has created.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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This morning, I was reading a forward which was posted. A man had noticed a snake that was in the fire, burning, so he tried to pick it up and got bit. It dropped down in the fire again. He then got a piece of metal and went to pick it up again. Someone was nearby and noticed what he was trying to do. He loved nature so much that the snake was not going to die. I'm sure God was watching Him. Nature is a wonderful thing God has created.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
There is a pretty well-defined line between wants and needs.
It is interesting how solid you create in various poetic genres. From sensual love pieces, to horror, to spiritual. You have a well-developed multi-faceted soul and NEVER disappoint.
There is not a writer on this site, including myself, who I haven't read and said, "Oh, that was a miss. Must be an off day."
Except you. You are an 'exception to the rule'. In fact, if I had to describe you in one sentence, that would be it. "An exception to the rule."
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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There is a pretty well-defined line between wants and needs.
It is interesting how solid you create in various poetic genres. From sensual love pieces, to horror, to spiritual. You have a well-developed multi-faceted soul and NEVER disappoint.
There is not a writer on this site, including myself, who I haven't read and said, "Oh, that was a miss. Must be an off day."
Except you. You are an 'exception to the rule'. In fact, if I had to describe you in one sentence, that would be it. "An exception to the rule."
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Douglas, you are very kind. You are talented as well.
I try to write about a variety of topics to keep it interesting.
Not everything I write is good, there's a lot, but once in a while I write something good. I write two poems a day so I have plenty of practice. (*<>*)
Have a fabulous weekend
Gypsy hugs
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully written piece of poetry dear anonymous! I love your play with words and your playful sentiment.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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This is a beautifully written piece of poetry dear anonymous! I love your play with words and your playful sentiment.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs