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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Johnny,
This poem in double nonet form tell us that we need to be careful of what we talk about. We need to keep secrets and no gossip. Words have power
to help and hurt.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Nicely done. I loved the use of terms like "in'trist" and "dibs of friendship". For me this added a fun tone to the poem that I greatly enjoyed. It's very creative. Love the unique format you use quite often. Great job.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024