2024 Gypsy's Tanka
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6 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
We cannot help but think of a vampire movie, and in this instance the victim gladly succumbs to a predator. You capture very well the moment when she gladly gives herself to him.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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We cannot help but think of a vampire movie, and in this instance the victim gladly succumbs to a predator. You capture very well the moment when she gladly gives herself to him.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark.
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Comment from shelley kaye
sweet vampire tanka suite
love the imagery of shivering in green grass under the red moon using the willow tree for shelter
smooth flow - liked the white and purple colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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sweet vampire tanka suite
love the imagery of shivering in green grass under the red moon using the willow tree for shelter
smooth flow - liked the white and purple colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Shelley
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Is one of these lovers mythical??? It doesn't make any difference it's still a very sensual and beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Is one of these lovers mythical??? It doesn't make any difference it's still a very sensual and beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Yes, the man is a vampire
Thank you very much Barbara
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I had a feeling one of the couple was not a mortal. I like the darker, yet romantic tone of this poem. The use of the word shiver was a perfect touch. This was great. There have been a lot of Easter poems and this was a nice change of pace. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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I had a feeling one of the couple was not a mortal. I like the darker, yet romantic tone of this poem. The use of the word shiver was a perfect touch. This was great. There have been a lot of Easter poems and this was a nice change of pace. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Gretchen.
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Comment from Jessica Moore1
Love this poem! Especially because it is about my favorite mythical creatures, vampires! How amazing would it be to find a love that would last forever. I think that's what always drew me to them.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Love this poem! Especially because it is about my favorite mythical creatures, vampires! How amazing would it be to find a love that would last forever. I think that's what always drew me to them.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Me too. Did you watch the movie, twilight? Bran Stoker's Dracula is one of my favorites.
Thank you very much for your excellent review.
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A beautifully sensual Tanka poem about vampires and their erotic lure. As always, the artistic look of the piece adds an extra dimension. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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A beautifully sensual Tanka poem about vampires and their erotic lure. As always, the artistic look of the piece adds an extra dimension. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
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