The Neglected Robot
Thanks to the children, he was renewed.3 total reviews
Comment from cupa tea
This is a cute little story. It's too bad the robot couldn't have just left the farm and joined a different one or created one of his own. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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This is a cute little story. It's too bad the robot couldn't have just left the farm and joined a different one or created one of his own. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Remember, he was programmed to please his owner. Had no choice in the matter. Thanks for the review. Appreciated.
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yea, I know. But you have a way of making me like that robot so I wish he could have...
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yea, I know. But you have a way of making me like that robot so I wish he could have...
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you're gonna win! Congrats!
Comment from Thesis
I enjoyed this story. I'm always amazed that children are the ones who can appreciate helping one in need and setting examples for elders to follow. Loyalty is a gift that should not be taken for granted or squandered. You exemplified that in this story.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed this story. I'm always amazed that children are the ones who can appreciate helping one in need and setting examples for elders to follow. Loyalty is a gift that should not be taken for granted or squandered. You exemplified that in this story.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and for the encouraging feedback.
Comment from artisart4u
This story has a person anxious to find out how the end of the story.
This is like cars or our health, we got to pay attention to little things that pop-up before they become a major issue.
This is very nicely written. It would make a good story for a children's book.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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This story has a person anxious to find out how the end of the story.
This is like cars or our health, we got to pay attention to little things that pop-up before they become a major issue.
This is very nicely written. It would make a good story for a children's book.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and for the six star review. I will think about the children's book idea.