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Comment from jessizero
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I loved the repetition of the line "I miss you!" The last line wrapped it up neatly. I am sorry for whatever loss caused you to write this poem, lovely though the poem was. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much for the six-stars and nice review. I really do appreciate it. I wrote this in the loss of my mom. We had such a good time together almost every Sunday after church. I think I will always miss her.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this poem about a lost loved one. Yes, loss is very difficult, but God has promised us that we will be reunited in Heaven with our loved one. I look forward to that promise. Knowing when my time comes, I will be with my loved ones again.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I appreciate it. What a wonderful day it will be when we are all together again in heaven singing his praises. I look forward to that day too.
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a heartfelt poem, did you write it about someone you love? Iv'e lost so many people in my life that l still miss, even after many years have passed. It's a comfort to think that they are in a better place.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Boogienights, thank you for your review. I appreciate it. Yes I wrote this for the loss of my mom. I have lost my dad34 years ago. I loss my brother and nephew and mother all in one year last year. I loved them all and miss them. but I miss mom the most. She was my best friend. we spent so much time together.
Comment from Aussie
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'I wonder what all you are doing?' Instead - I wonder what you are doing if you are referring to your love. "He is not dead, merely sleeping." He watches you every day and waits until you come home. A tender touch with the blessed Mother as an illustration. K xx

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. This was for my mom. I do believe she is dead from this life and her eternal life with God started when she took her last breath. I know I will be with her someday. Till then I'll miss her.
reply by Aussie on 08-Mar-2024
    Your Mother watches over you.
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
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This is a beautiful and heart-wrenching poem. I'm so sorry for your pain and loss. I truly hope writing brings a sense of comfort!
All the best,
Xo
Jessica

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Jessica, thank you for your review and kind words. The loss of my mom has been hard for me. My sisters and I spent almost every Sunday after church with her. She was so full of life and fun to hang out with.
Comment from mermaids
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This is a touching poem about grief. I like your description of heaven and how this individual is living there. Excellent use of words that takes the reader to that heavenly realm. This is a poem that touches the heart.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I greatly appreciate it.
    I miss my mother each and every day. I know I will see her again when I die. but till then I think I will miss her. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. God Bless
Comment from Lisasview
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Oh boy is this ever heartbreaking dearest S,.M. even with children and grandchildren around to lose your special loved one must be so very difficult...Yes, of course you miss him...
Lisasview

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Lisa, Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate. I wrote this with the passing of my mom. She was our best friend. My sisters and I spent almost every Sunday after church with her. We had so much fun.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Lisa, Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate. I wrote this with the passing of my mom. She was our best friend. My sisters and I spent almost every Sunday after church with her. We had so much fun.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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This is such a sweet message to the one you have loved and now are missing. Its tender, simple words of love and longing touch the heart. A really nice poem.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it. I know everyone loves their moms. I just miss her. I hope you have a good day.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it. I know everyone loves their moms. I just miss her. I hope you have a good day.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, I'll Always Miss You, seems dedicated to an individual who has gone to his/her reward. So many days go by that we must be reminded how much more we could have said and done with the now departed.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it. I have no regrets with my mom passing. I would leave my husband and sons almost every Sunday to go play with mom. We had so much fun. I know she loved me, and she knew we all loved her. I just miss her.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it. I have no regrets with my mom passing. I would leave my husband and sons almost every Sunday to go play with mom. We had so much fun. I know she loved me, and she knew we all loved her. I just miss her.
Comment from jaded831
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Heartwarming, relatable, the words flow, you did a wonderful job. The picture is beautiful and spiritual. Sorry for your loss in it is about you. We all know how hard it is loosing a loved one.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I appreciate it. Yes we all lose a loved one at some point in life. I just miss my mom. I hope you have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I appreciate it. Yes we all lose a loved one at some point in life. I just miss my mom. I hope you have a wonderful day.