2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Around the Bend".
8 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You have true feelings for your writing that stand out right away. These days, my reviewing is slow. I am
hibernating. My pain is such that I am taking my aspirin whenever I wake up after fours or more of sleep. I am keeping track of my dosage times. Then, I drink some liquid, eat a pouch of tuna, and crawl under my heated blankets and pads. Off to sleep I go, Karen :-)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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You have true feelings for your writing that stand out right away. These days, my reviewing is slow. I am
hibernating. My pain is such that I am taking my aspirin whenever I wake up after fours or more of sleep. I am keeping track of my dosage times. Then, I drink some liquid, eat a pouch of tuna, and crawl under my heated blankets and pads. Off to sleep I go, Karen :-)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I'm sorry I hope you get better soon.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from shelley kaye
ooh this is a very hopeful poem that love will come and love will last...
love the last stanza when dreams get shuttered true love is around the bend!
good thought-provoking poem with cool pics and colour scheme
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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ooh this is a very hopeful poem that love will come and love will last...
love the last stanza when dreams get shuttered true love is around the bend!
good thought-provoking poem with cool pics and colour scheme
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When true unconditional love calls no matter how hurt one's been that love will heal all wounds and make one whole again. Beautiful presentation and thank you for sharing your gift with us.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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When true unconditional love calls no matter how hurt one's been that love will heal all wounds and make one whole again. Beautiful presentation and thank you for sharing your gift with us.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....A stay positive poem the says never give up hope.... Just hope what's coming around the bend isn't love, it's the grill of a Mack truck looking to strain you though into the radiator!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....A stay positive poem the says never give up hope.... Just hope what's coming around the bend isn't love, it's the grill of a Mack truck looking to strain you though into the radiator!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Gypsy, here is another one that I love so much. Your romantic poems are the best, your free verse lovely and your presentation beautiful. Put them all together and they are all exotic and so erotic. I must have you show me sometime how to add that extra picture in there. It is always so strikingly gorgeous every time.
Thanks so much for sharing this lovely free verse! Love, Debi
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Gypsy, here is another one that I love so much. Your romantic poems are the best, your free verse lovely and your presentation beautiful. Put them all together and they are all exotic and so erotic. I must have you show me sometime how to add that extra picture in there. It is always so strikingly gorgeous every time.
Thanks so much for sharing this lovely free verse! Love, Debi
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Debi.
Love
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Love does call us, and for some it takes only one path, though for others it may take a few, I really like the message in your words, we should never give up on love, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Love does call us, and for some it takes only one path, though for others it may take a few, I really like the message in your words, we should never give up on love, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I do think there is someone for everyone. Doesn't mean it will last. Sometimes that perfect person is only in your life to get you to your next phase of life. I liked your poem. It was optimistic. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I do think there is someone for everyone. Doesn't mean it will last. Sometimes that perfect person is only in your life to get you to your next phase of life. I liked your poem. It was optimistic. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I thought I found the one but I was wrong. Maybe I was a lesson to learn and moved on.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
I did it for the glory of love. Ah. . . If but only everyone saw love this way.
Great painting of pictures in your readers' minds, only you used your gift of words instead of a paintbrush.
There is an errant red 'i' in there. Unless it was intentional. But that would confuse me.
Great piece, MariVal.
Douglas
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I did it for the glory of love. Ah. . . If but only everyone saw love this way.
Great painting of pictures in your readers' minds, only you used your gift of words instead of a paintbrush.
There is an errant red 'i' in there. Unless it was intentional. But that would confuse me.
Great piece, MariVal.
Douglas
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Douglas, I will change the color. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs