Passion
When love is burning bright.2 total reviews
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Very good personification in the first line. The poem flows well. Good complimentary picture.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Very good personification in the first line. The poem flows well. Good complimentary picture.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much for your read and feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing like a passionate dance to entertain and watch and also be involved in, dancing is a good way of exercising and the music always adds some magic, I enjoyed this post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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There is nothing like a passionate dance to entertain and watch and also be involved in, dancing is a good way of exercising and the music always adds some magic, I enjoyed this post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the read and feeback.