Comment from A.E.Smith

Excellent

Loved your poem and the image you used. Not only do I like this style of poetry, but your clever usage of musical terminology in every line. Nicely done! Favorite line is "I complete your harmony," because isn't that what we all want? Someone who completely understands/completes us? Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024

Thanks so much! :-)

Comment from Julie G1

Excellent

Well composed. This poem presents a great response to the poem. It conveys a clear and apt message, nice touch of love. The graphic was effective, suited the romantic theme. Overall, this verse worked well for the reader, choice of imagery matched your style.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024

Thank you! :-)

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What a wonderful senryu, music and love do have the habit of going together, your choice of words are beautiful, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024

Thanks so much!