2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Sweet Surrender"*
7 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
I remember the song called Sweet Surrender by Bread. I think your description is beautiful. Surrendering to a feeling is a scary thing. Takes all of your trust. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I remember the song called Sweet Surrender by Bread. I think your description is beautiful. Surrendering to a feeling is a scary thing. Takes all of your trust. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Some relationships are so strong that no matter how hard we try we simply can't stay away. It may be toxic, but the pull is so strong that we can't resist. I enjoyed reading this poem and the entire presentation.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Some relationships are so strong that no matter how hard we try we simply can't stay away. It may be toxic, but the pull is so strong that we can't resist. I enjoyed reading this poem and the entire presentation.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. Yes, the heart knows what it wants, even if it's the wrong choice.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
love those last two lines!
rain is cleansing and refreshing
very nice tanka with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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love those last two lines!
rain is cleansing and refreshing
very nice tanka with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The picture is superb. The writing matches breath for breath. You are the queen. Why some big publishing house hasn't snatched you up is beyond me. I enjoy all your writing even when I don't have time to review it all, rest assured I read it. Karen :-)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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The picture is superb. The writing matches breath for breath. You are the queen. Why some big publishing house hasn't snatched you up is beyond me. I enjoy all your writing even when I don't have time to review it all, rest assured I read it. Karen :-)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Karen.
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from lyenochka
That's sad if the couple are not good for one another because one has an addiction problem or personality disorder. Those reasons to stay away should not be washed by the rain.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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That's sad if the couple are not good for one another because one has an addiction problem or personality disorder. Those reasons to stay away should not be washed by the rain.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. How did the bday party go?
Love
Marival
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It was fun. We took two of the grandkids and three of the neighbor kids for frozen yogurt. It was so fun to see them chatting away and enjoying themselves!
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ah... yes, the sound of girls chatting and laughing is endearing. I remember mine. I am happy you all had a fun time.
I miss my family, I am glad they are coming back today. I was in a weird mood last night, crying watching movies ... lol. sometimes it's good to have a good cry out for no reason. I don't get to do it when they are around, I don't want to scare them.
love,
marival
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ah... yes, the sound of girls chatting and laughing is endearing. I remember mine. I am happy you all had a fun time.
I miss my family, I am glad they are coming back today. I was in a weird mood last night, crying watching movies ... lol. sometimes it's good to have a good cry out for no reason. I don't get to do it when they are around, I don't want to scare them.
love,
marival
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ah... yes, the sound of girls chatting and laughing is endearing. I remember mine. I am happy you all had a fun time.
I miss my family, I am glad they are coming back today. I was in a weird mood last night, crying watching movies ... lol. sometimes it's good to have a good cry out for no reason. I don't get to do it when they are around, I don't want to scare them.
love,
marival
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💖💖. Glad your family will be home soon!
Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, sometimes even the wrong kind of love just keeps us coming back, I think in this kind of love, hope has more power than love, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Beautiful, sometimes even the wrong kind of love just keeps us coming back, I think in this kind of love, hope has more power than love, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, kym.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Gypsy, this is what I call an ooh-la-la poem. Attraction and anticipation are powerful feelings--be it right, or be it wrong. It just there, and it exists. Of note:
let the rain cleanse off
the reasons to stay away
Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Hello Gypsy, this is what I call an ooh-la-la poem. Attraction and anticipation are powerful feelings--be it right, or be it wrong. It just there, and it exists. Of note:
let the rain cleanse off
the reasons to stay away
Beautiful presentation. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs