2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "I'm Addicted To You"*
6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So many talented people end up addicted to drugs and/or alcohol and they're lives end way to soon. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and addressing this problem.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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So many talented people end up addicted to drugs and/or alcohol and they're lives end way to soon. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and addressing this problem.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
yea, i've heard heroin is bad - it sucks you in and never lets go.
a great, deeply meaningful tanka - good heart-filled pivot line
and a smooth connection from the first two lines to the second two...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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yea, i've heard heroin is bad - it sucks you in and never lets go.
a great, deeply meaningful tanka - good heart-filled pivot line
and a smooth connection from the first two lines to the second two...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Another great poem. To need or want someone so badly that it becomes an addiction is scary. I don't think I've ever felt that helplessly in love with someone. You drove the point home with the picture of Janis Joplin. Well done. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Another great poem. To need or want someone so badly that it becomes an addiction is scary. I don't think I've ever felt that helplessly in love with someone. You drove the point home with the picture of Janis Joplin. Well done. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I used to have a tape of Janis Joplin's greatest hits. It's tragic how she died. She certainly sang with much passion. You ended the poem with the title of another song which I remember was made popular by Roberta Flack.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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I used to have a tape of Janis Joplin's greatest hits. It's tragic how she died. She certainly sang with much passion. You ended the poem with the title of another song which I remember was made popular by Roberta Flack.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Yes, Roberta flack, "killing me softly"
Thank you very much, big sister. Have a wonderful day.
Love
Marival
Comment from tfawcus
Wow! This one struck at the heart. I remember that song so vividly and the tragic circumstances of her death. I shall have the tune buzzing around in my head for the rest of the day. The construction of your tanka is superb.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Wow! This one struck at the heart. I remember that song so vividly and the tragic circumstances of her death. I shall have the tune buzzing around in my head for the rest of the day. The construction of your tanka is superb.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Tony. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is extraordinary! Good descriptions, syllables, and imagery. I enjoyed reviewing this and the entire visual presentation. Well done.
My nephews are sinning on FOX tomorrow night at 8pm I Can See Your Voice. I can't say more but watch if you can. :)
Best wishes,
Alexan :) xxox
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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This is extraordinary! Good descriptions, syllables, and imagery. I enjoyed reviewing this and the entire visual presentation. Well done.
My nephews are sinning on FOX tomorrow night at 8pm I Can See Your Voice. I can't say more but watch if you can. :)
Best wishes,
Alexan :) xxox
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Alexan. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
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I don't know if you watch TV but my Nephews are performing on Fox's show I Can See Your Voice tonight at 8EST They are dressed as baseball players. I can't say more.
Love
Alexan x