Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Nice plot movement.
Very well written chapter. Good work.
I don't know about 'grace in heaven', like points stored up, but the sentiment is good. And prayer is always good.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024

Prayers are always good! Thank you for your thoughts and for continuing to follow my story. I appreciate it very much.

Smiles, Carol

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

Sounds like Judy better escape from Bobby while she can! Buying drugs and putting them in Dion's car? Such a scoundrel! Isabella is so sweet and protective of Gabby. She really needs someone to look after her, and needs her father not to find her. Good chapter & good dialogue. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024

HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY, CAROL

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I doubt if Judy will escape Bobby's spell before something happens. As for Gabby, her boat is about to get rocked again.

Smiles, Carol

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

I'm back to read some more of your fantastic story. It's been a tough few days after the loss of my long-time friend, Blossom. I still expect to see her every time I turn around. Your story is terrific. Nice writing.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024

My dear April, it will take some time to beginning healing after your loss. I'm sure Blossom is watching over you at all times. I appreciate that you have taken the time to still follow the story. I hope in just a small way it helps take your mind away from your grief.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm finding this hard to read because it seems like the good people are being punished and it doesn't look like Dion's goodness would be rewarded as Bobby has set a trap for Dion. I hope Dion finds the bags before anyone else.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024

Good morning, Helen. I guess my gloomy version of the world is that bad things do happen to good people.... but in the end things will right themselves. A few more chapters and Bobby will understand forever.

Smiles, Carol

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Your story continues with high action, a lot of threads weaving together, good drama! I didn't see any grammar errors. Looking forward to the next installment! Thanks. Julie

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024

I love seeing your smiling face when I get up each morning. A bit of sunshine in my cold, dreary room. Thank you for your review. I appreciate it so much.

Smiles, Carol

Comment from LJbutterfly

Exceptional

Once again, I'm enthralled by the detail you put into every chapter, from descriptions of the scenes to the realistic dialogue, not to mention the complexity of the storyline. Every chapter is well-written and suspenseful and deserves six stars.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024

Thank you, Lorraine. I've alway got serveral storylines going because that's just the way life is....getting hit from all sides. I can't say it enough but I am over the moon that people not only like the story, but they see my characters, their dialogue, and description. It means so much to me.
Thank you so much....Carol

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Yes, even the nicest people can loose control and become nasty when they are drinking, and when they are already buttholes to begin with, who knows what they'll become. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024

There's your smiling face making my day... I definitely have met a few. I'll settle for a nice glass of wine so I can keep my head on straight.... well, hopefully. sometimes it gets a bit cockeyed and I haven't even had a drink. LOL

Smiles and hugs, Carol

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I don't like the sound of that. What is going to happen? Of course I know. Those drugs will be found, and obviously the police are going to get an anonymous tip from Bobby. This is not good! :( Is there another chapter? I'll go and see. Another amazing chapter, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024

Yes, there's another chapter. I'm working on the next (15) but I've got to gather more money in order to post. You might be left sitting on the edge of your chair...but I'll try to hurry. LOL Thanks for the review, Sandra. You're the best!

Smiles and hugs, Carol

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Dion is a very upright and likeable young man. Jason is not, and it is quite a shock to Dion to see his shallow and uncaring nature. Planting the drugs in Dion's car - how vengeful of Bobby! Well written.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024

Good morning, Wendy....
Though it's the middle of the night here and sleep does not come. So here I am on FS being graced by kind words. I thank you for your constant support.

Carol

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a really good chapter. Bobby, the nut, is trying to ruin Dion's life and me may succeed if Jackson doesn't believe Dion's innocence. Gabby has found a "grandmother" even if Natasha doesn't appreciate her. Dion is seriously disappointed in the guy he thought was his best friend. All your characters are very well drawn. Some are good for various reasons, and some are really bad people, each in their own special way.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024

Thank you for taking the time to understand the makings of my characters. I appreciate your sincere comments and your constant support.

Smiles, Carol