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Be Mine

Celebrate love? We have a day for that!

8 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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You're very brave entering a contest for your first milestone post. Congratulations on doing that. I enjoyed reading this love story. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
    Thanks for your review! I appreciate it :)
Comment from bob cullen
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Firstly, welcome to Fanstory. What a delightful first post. I hope you showed it to him. Sure it would have scored you plenty of brownie points. I've been on this site for many years, hope it provides you as much pleasure as I've received,

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
    Thank you! I'm definitely enjoying this site, so far. No, I haven't shown it to him yet. I told him about it. Going to give him on Valentine's day, all cheesy like :)
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very nicely written poem for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. I also want to welcome you to fan story, and I do hope that you will find this site to be quite helpful to you for your writing skills. Patricia.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thank you! Happy to be here already
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed reading this poem. Very good job. Your words come through strongly how much you care. Nice rhyming. Valentines day is one of my favorite

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is excellent writing for the challenge! It has good descriptive words and imagery. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it.

Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Gunner Lil
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Excellent poem. You followed the rules for the contest, and you should be proud no matter the outcome.
It is an easy read that has a very good flow and pace.
Keep up the good work.
Thank you.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from shelley kaye
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welcome to fanstory and congrats on your first post!

this was a really sweet and loving valentine poem
interesting first line of a cliche...
love the "spark has returned" line!
nice imagery and smooth flow and rhyme

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thanks! Excited to be here.
Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a well-written poem. The poem reads and flows well. This poem is a wonderful tribute to your valentine. This is a very good poem, especially since this is your first post. Welcome aboard.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thanks! Excited to be here.
reply by Baltimore Born on 08-Feb-2024
    You are welcome.