2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Sailing Westward"*
6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Love poems written with blue stardust ink would be extremely special love poems for an extremely special person. Thank you for sharing this complete presentation with us. I'm curious how come this young lady's gown isn't all wet. Mine would be.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Love poems written with blue stardust ink would be extremely special love poems for an extremely special person. Thank you for sharing this complete presentation with us. I'm curious how come this young lady's gown isn't all wet. Mine would be.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh love the image of blue stardust for ink... wistful...
a great tanka with vivid imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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ooh love the image of blue stardust for ink... wistful...
a great tanka with vivid imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a beautifully visual poem. I loved the dreamlike feel of it. Like stepping on a magical boat that sails itself and its smooth sailing under the moonlit sky. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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This was such a beautifully visual poem. I loved the dreamlike feel of it. Like stepping on a magical boat that sails itself and its smooth sailing under the moonlit sky. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Gretchen, I hope you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This Tanka is beautifully written and flows well. It's full of romantic symbolism like Venus and stardust. The presentation is great and elegant.
Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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This Tanka is beautifully written and flows well. It's full of romantic symbolism like Venus and stardust. The presentation is great and elegant.
Well done.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I guess the love will help her travel across the world. I really liked "with a cargo of love poems written with blue stardust ink" and your middle line is a great pivot to change the focus from the traveling to the guidance by the goddess of love.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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I guess the love will help her travel across the world. I really liked "with a cargo of love poems written with blue stardust ink" and your middle line is a great pivot to change the focus from the traveling to the guidance by the goddess of love.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. You are the best.
Love
Marival
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely tanka and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best and all your writing. May you have a good evening and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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This is a lovely tanka and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best and all your writing. May you have a good evening and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs