2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Take a Breath".
11 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, this poem is like a mantra, the more I chanted the more I feel enlighten:) Thank you for sharing this marvelous piece of wisdom that brought me so much joy.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Wow, this poem is like a mantra, the more I chanted the more I feel enlighten:) Thank you for sharing this marvelous piece of wisdom that brought me so much joy.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Yes, Marival I can so identify with this poem which describes how we can connect with the omnipresent. To me, omnipresent is nature which surrounds us at every step. Un abrazo, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Yes, Marival I can so identify with this poem which describes how we can connect with the omnipresent. To me, omnipresent is nature which surrounds us at every step. Un abrazo, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
Abracitos y besitos
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, God is loving and has unlimited power. We just need to be patient and wait for Him to work within us. Sometimes that difficult, at least for me. Your presentation is wonderful. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Yes, God is loving and has unlimited power. We just need to be patient and wait for Him to work within us. Sometimes that difficult, at least for me. Your presentation is wonderful. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Lovely poem, Gypsy. I very much like the form, although this is the first time I've seen it. I need to stop and take a breath, sometimes things become to much to deal with. Passing those over to God, is what I should do, He'll sort it out allowing to me to breathe and catch up. Your presentation is fabulous, and the calming rose and water at the end finishes it off nicely. Well done!! Sandra xx
I have one more chapter to go, and then I'm on poetry full time for a while, so I will be trying out some Haiku's. I will look to you for some help if I may? xxx
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Lovely poem, Gypsy. I very much like the form, although this is the first time I've seen it. I need to stop and take a breath, sometimes things become to much to deal with. Passing those over to God, is what I should do, He'll sort it out allowing to me to breathe and catch up. Your presentation is fabulous, and the calming rose and water at the end finishes it off nicely. Well done!! Sandra xx
I have one more chapter to go, and then I'm on poetry full time for a while, so I will be trying out some Haiku's. I will look to you for some help if I may? xxx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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I will always be here for you, Sandra. Haiku is a beautiful poetic form. I love to teach, it will be my pleasure.
I forget to breath deep and take a minute to turn over my will to the care of God. When I control my life during difficult times or worry about something I fear, I just make myself sick. It's not always easy but I try.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you, Gypsy, I will try to write one and then PM it to you to see if it's right or if it's just a 5-7-5 which I don't want to write. 🥰😊
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Sounds good 😊
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is nice, and I haven't seen this style of poem before. Your poetry is stylish and well thought out.
Your pictures are striking and one of a kind. Have a good week. Karen
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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This is nice, and I haven't seen this style of poem before. Your poetry is stylish and well thought out.
Your pictures are striking and one of a kind. Have a good week. Karen
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Jim Vechio wrote my first story it is a pip! Will you try? It can be a poem! Karen
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This poem is very spiritual and reminds me of doing Yoga which I love to do when I'm not skiing, biking or rowing. I love the presentation, especially the GIF on the bottom.
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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This poem is very spiritual and reminds me of doing Yoga which I love to do when I'm not skiing, biking or rowing. I love the presentation, especially the GIF on the bottom.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I think it's so marvellous to loved by God, and to live underneath His mighty hand and His omnipotent presence, although it may not be obvious to those guarded against, we feel safe. Beautifully written,blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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I think it's so marvellous to loved by God, and to live underneath His mighty hand and His omnipotent presence, although it may not be obvious to those guarded against, we feel safe. Beautifully written,blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I need this message because so often I forget to take that deep breath and give over everything to God. It's so easy to get wrapped up on fixing things and completing tasks. But what needs to be done will be done if we give it over to Him! Thanks for this!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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I need this message because so often I forget to take that deep breath and give over everything to God. It's so easy to get wrapped up on fixing things and completing tasks. But what needs to be done will be done if we give it over to Him! Thanks for this!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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You are welcome, it's what I try to do but I'm not always good at it. Thank you very much, big sister. It means a lot to me.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Wy Jung
Interesting form. I'd never heard of that before. Each of your pieces comes with a little poetry lesson that I learn from. This is beautiful and a nice reminder of the importance of breath. Graphics match beautifully and the font has been chosen and implemented with care. Well done, as always. I see nothing that needs work.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Interesting form. I'd never heard of that before. Each of your pieces comes with a little poetry lesson that I learn from. This is beautiful and a nice reminder of the importance of breath. Graphics match beautifully and the font has been chosen and implemented with care. Well done, as always. I see nothing that needs work.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
nice whitney!
deep and meaningful
with good word imagery,
colours, and a smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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nice whitney!
deep and meaningful
with good word imagery,
colours, and a smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs