What if?
We had never met8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You did a wonderful job describing the unconditional love that God wants each one of us to find. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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You did a wonderful job describing the unconditional love that God wants each one of us to find. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thank you, that means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Love Poem Poetry Contest. The words work well, and I found myself 'seeing' the characters through the clip art you chose.
Good luck in the contest,
~MP~
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Love Poem Poetry Contest. The words work well, and I found myself 'seeing' the characters through the clip art you chose.
Good luck in the contest,
~MP~
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you for this fantastic review. :)
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully and heartfelt poem for the love portrait contest I wish you the very best in the contest your presentation is beautiful and your wording is terrific. Patric
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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This is a beautifully and heartfelt poem for the love portrait contest I wish you the very best in the contest your presentation is beautiful and your wording is terrific. Patric
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from bob cullen
That really is beautiful. My hope is you'll still feel that way in fifty years. And I hope also he cried when you showed him what you'd written. There is nothing sweeter than true love. This year my wife and I notch up fifty years. Would you mind if I stole that poem and gave it to her on our anniversary in November.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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That really is beautiful. My hope is you'll still feel that way in fifty years. And I hope also he cried when you showed him what you'd written. There is nothing sweeter than true love. This year my wife and I notch up fifty years. Would you mind if I stole that poem and gave it to her on our anniversary in November.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Congradulatios on so many happy years! Of course you can use my poem, i'm honored that you'd want to. Thank you for this exceptional review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet natured post about love and how it has developed over time and the writer reflects on the fate and ponders about the path taken here and what would have happened if they had not met. A warm hearted love poem for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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A sweet natured post about love and how it has developed over time and the writer reflects on the fate and ponders about the path taken here and what would have happened if they had not met. A warm hearted love poem for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you, your reviews are so thoughtful. :)
Comment from Julie Helms
I really like how your what if's (negative) then transformed into what ifs (positive). Your poem is a beautiful statement of your love and appreciation of your partner.
Thanks for sharing, Julie.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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I really like how your what if's (negative) then transformed into what ifs (positive). Your poem is a beautiful statement of your love and appreciation of your partner.
Thanks for sharing, Julie.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Wy Jung
Nice to see what-if's as a way to cherish the relationship one is in, instead of what-if's after the end of the connection. Well written and brings a smile. The only change I would be is to add a little background color that reflects the emotion you felt when you wrote the words. Color brings so much!
Kudos and good luck~ Wy
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Nice to see what-if's as a way to cherish the relationship one is in, instead of what-if's after the end of the connection. Well written and brings a smile. The only change I would be is to add a little background color that reflects the emotion you felt when you wrote the words. Color brings so much!
Kudos and good luck~ Wy
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you for this terrific review and the helpful suggestion....l added color. :)
Comment from Allieas
Such a beautiful love poem! I think we've all gone down the "what if?" rabbit hole a time or two. You described this beautifully. Good luck on the contest!
Alex
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Such a beautiful love poem! I think we've all gone down the "what if?" rabbit hole a time or two. You described this beautifully. Good luck on the contest!
Alex
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, l appreciate you reading my poem. :)
