2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Midnight Sky".
5 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery. I could see the whole scene from the boat being pushed back to sea to 'the ocean waves carry my ashes" ~ soulful. Well done. Beautiful graphics. A pleasure to read.
Xo. M
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery. I could see the whole scene from the boat being pushed back to sea to 'the ocean waves carry my ashes" ~ soulful. Well done. Beautiful graphics. A pleasure to read.
Xo. M
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Margaret. 🙂
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was exceptionally beautiful. I love the feeling that time has passed. It was like life on the sea, yet a metaphor. Beautifully done. This will stay with me for some time to come. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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This was exceptionally beautiful. I love the feeling that time has passed. It was like life on the sea, yet a metaphor. Beautifully done. This will stay with me for some time to come. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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It's about death but it can be different for each. Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem and the presentation are gorgeous. It has a somber, calming tone to it. We are so blessed that your share your talent with us. This is another example of your talent.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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This poem and the presentation are gorgeous. It has a somber, calming tone to it. We are so blessed that your share your talent with us. This is another example of your talent.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
cool pic
calming, gentle free verse
with smooth flowing waters
between the imagistic lines
nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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cool pic
calming, gentle free verse
with smooth flowing waters
between the imagistic lines
nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a great night, Shelley. .
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Julie Helms
This is beautifully written. I am taking it as an end of life scenario. The phrases "Winter breeze" "dark midnight skies" "somber clouds" all lend to the feeling of something ending in a peaceful sort of way. It doesn't even feel sad, just like a moving on through to the next phase. Which seems to be represented by "tender stores". Very nicely done, enjoy! Julie
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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This is beautifully written. I am taking it as an end of life scenario. The phrases "Winter breeze" "dark midnight skies" "somber clouds" all lend to the feeling of something ending in a peaceful sort of way. It doesn't even feel sad, just like a moving on through to the next phase. Which seems to be represented by "tender stores". Very nicely done, enjoy! Julie
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a great night, Julie.
Gypsy hugs