Resting on Laurels
Sudden calamity, from joy to sorrow3 total reviews
Comment from Jeano
Such an ominous hook. Imagination can go wild with this one. This story can go anywhere the reader wants to take it, maybe even the writer. Good job!
Write on!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Such an ominous hook. Imagination can go wild with this one. This story can go anywhere the reader wants to take it, maybe even the writer. Good job!
Write on!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate your great review!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent one line story for the contest.
How great a moment can be in our lives.
It does rely a bit on the picture though.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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This is an excellent one line story for the contest.
How great a moment can be in our lives.
It does rely a bit on the picture though.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you.
I thought flowers inappropriate.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Yikes! Well, I guess this says it all! One minute, your world is fine; the next, you are watching unimaginable devastation.
I enjoyed this piece, from photo to words. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, Johnc
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Yikes! Well, I guess this says it all! One minute, your world is fine; the next, you are watching unimaginable devastation.
I enjoyed this piece, from photo to words. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, Johnc
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much.