Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The first Sandra"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
4 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
I don't know where you get the super creep factor from but holy smokes my skin crawls every time I read one of your chapters of course that makes it a fantastically written and well done piece of work I can find no issue with grammar setting structure subject matter or punctuation.
A fantastic entry that only requires one thing to be done hope you have a great evening!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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I don't know where you get the super creep factor from but holy smokes my skin crawls every time I read one of your chapters of course that makes it a fantastically written and well done piece of work I can find no issue with grammar setting structure subject matter or punctuation.
A fantastic entry that only requires one thing to be done hope you have a great evening!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your comments and input. Every critique is welcomed.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You have laid out the perfect crime, or maybe not.I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. You have laid out the perfect crime, or maybe not.I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you! I hope you are enjoying the book.
Comment from Sabrina H.
Wow, what a scary but intriguing chapter. It is interesting that the chapter is in the eyes of a killer just getting started. Look forward to reading more.
Keep writing:)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Wow, what a scary but intriguing chapter. It is interesting that the chapter is in the eyes of a killer just getting started. Look forward to reading more.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I invite you to read the whole book so far. I appreciate your input and your comments. Please read more. It encourages me to continue on.
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a scary chapter. I'm sorry I haven't read what came before. The killer seems to be well prepared to carry out his plans. Suggestion: There are two (now)s in the last sentence of paragraph three. One could be eliminated. I hope this guy has made an error somewhere, so that he will be caught before he kills Sandra. Good chapter.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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This is a scary chapter. I'm sorry I haven't read what came before. The killer seems to be well prepared to carry out his plans. Suggestion: There are two (now)s in the last sentence of paragraph three. One could be eliminated. I hope this guy has made an error somewhere, so that he will be caught before he kills Sandra. Good chapter.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your feedback I have corrected the sentence in question. I encourage you to read the entire story. I think you would enjoy it. I love the feedback that I could get the more the merrier.