Black Lion Inn
80 word flash3 total reviews
Comment from Jeano
Ooo, kind of dark, but I loved it. Feelings of the heart can't be bought. You set the scene and story line well in 80 words, and then gave us that great ending. You also gave us many lines to read between. Most enjoyable.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Ooo, kind of dark, but I loved it. Feelings of the heart can't be bought. You set the scene and story line well in 80 words, and then gave us that great ending. You also gave us many lines to read between. Most enjoyable.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed the detailed descriptions and authentic dialogue here. The twist took me by surprise due to good writing timing. I like the image and it works well with your story. enjoyed reviewing this and it is a good entry for the challenge.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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I enjoyed the detailed descriptions and authentic dialogue here. The twist took me by surprise due to good writing timing. I like the image and it works well with your story. enjoyed reviewing this and it is a good entry for the challenge.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Superb review & thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An eerie post and I enjoyed this magical ghost story for the contest and wish you luck, it gave me the chills, so this is a good sign, love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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An eerie post and I enjoyed this magical ghost story for the contest and wish you luck, it gave me the chills, so this is a good sign, love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Delighted you enjoyed reading it! zanya
