2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Dancing with Golden Dusk"*
8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I like the idea of the waves flirting with us as we walk along the beach. That gives us a fun image. Your words and your artwork are great. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I like the idea of the waves flirting with us as we walk along the beach. That gives us a fun image. Your words and your artwork are great. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a lovely Tanka - with carefully chosen words and a fitting illustration. It has a great rhythm like the waves, and the personification of the waves is excellent.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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This is a lovely Tanka - with carefully chosen words and a fitting illustration. It has a great rhythm like the waves, and the personification of the waves is excellent.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day, Verna.
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Comment from tfawcus
The combination of beautiful artwork and understated eroticism reminds me of Gungalo's poems - God rest her soul. Those flirtatious waves coming and going as they please create a lovely image in the mind.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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The combination of beautiful artwork and understated eroticism reminds me of Gungalo's poems - God rest her soul. Those flirtatious waves coming and going as they please create a lovely image in the mind.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Tony. Your review means a lot to me. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from kahpot
Love your use of descriptive words in this beautiful poem and presentation, and the connection with flirtations and the ebb and flow of the waves, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Love your use of descriptive words in this beautiful poem and presentation, and the connection with flirtations and the ebb and flow of the waves, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day., kym
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I love how you make nature so human with qualities that make you feel emotions. This is such a picturesque poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I love how you make nature so human with qualities that make you feel emotions. This is such a picturesque poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day, Gretchen.
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Comment from lyenochka
I like your personification of the waves as being "flirtatious" and "caressing" the dancer's feet. Good use of alliteration and consonance throughout the poem with lovely illustration!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I like your personification of the waves as being "flirtatious" and "caressing" the dancer's feet. Good use of alliteration and consonance throughout the poem with lovely illustration!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it.
Love,
Marival
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good imagery. I could see the whole scene. Of special note:
flirtatious waves
that come and go as they please
caressing my bare feet
(Nice)
Excellent photo choice. Beautiful presentation. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good imagery. I could see the whole scene. Of special note:
flirtatious waves
that come and go as they please
caressing my bare feet
(Nice)
Excellent photo choice. Beautiful presentation. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from shelley kaye
love the "flirtatious waves"!! never thought of them that way!
a great tanka with colourful imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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love the "flirtatious waves"!! never thought of them that way!
a great tanka with colourful imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day, Shelley.
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