Dreams Float
a 10 Word Poem11 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Very poetic and imaginative. Your poem is peaceful and makes me think of candles floating on a lake to honor the dead. Yet it also creates a beautiful scene in the mind that creates a calm.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Very poetic and imaginative. Your poem is peaceful and makes me think of candles floating on a lake to honor the dead. Yet it also creates a beautiful scene in the mind that creates a calm.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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thank you very much!!! I'm so glad it blessed you!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have 4 votes
Where I live there is a stream that snakes through the woods . Now it's silent but come Spring when the days become warmer it begins to fill and gurgle cause the snow has started to melt from the mount above at 1400 m.
It's not only beautiful to watch the stream sparkle like gems in the sunlight but also to hear its
soothing, rhythmic sound.
I love to close my eyes and let my mind drift off.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Ciao poet, you now have 4 votes
Where I live there is a stream that snakes through the woods . Now it's silent but come Spring when the days become warmer it begins to fill and gurgle cause the snow has started to melt from the mount above at 1400 m.
It's not only beautiful to watch the stream sparkle like gems in the sunlight but also to hear its
soothing, rhythmic sound.
I love to close my eyes and let my mind drift off.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you dear Franca. I would love to see that stream sparkle ni the sunlight. Hugs to you and have a lovely evening!
Melissa
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It?s 6.20 in the morning here
So sweet dreams to you!😴
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love "soft lavender streams..." It puts such a picture in my head as if I am out oat night just being one with nature as I watch the stream pass by. I might even be dipping my feet in.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I love "soft lavender streams..." It puts such a picture in my head as if I am out oat night just being one with nature as I watch the stream pass by. I might even be dipping my feet in.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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How wonderful your review is to read. Fun! Thanks.
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How wonderful your review is to read. Fun! Thanks.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The image makes the words flow in pink and blue hues. To slumber would be a little rocky in this image. Probably the atmosphere would appear tired and the dreams would float with the quietness of the lights.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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The image makes the words flow in pink and blue hues. To slumber would be a little rocky in this image. Probably the atmosphere would appear tired and the dreams would float with the quietness of the lights.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you Rosemary!
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Thank you Rosemary!
Comment from Bill Schott
This ten-word poem, Dreams Float, has the required word count and imagines the best parts of dreaming appearing before us as the whimsical elements of fantasy. Nice.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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This ten-word poem, Dreams Float, has the required word count and imagines the best parts of dreaming appearing before us as the whimsical elements of fantasy. Nice.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you Bill!
Comment from Navada
What beautiful imagery! You posit dreams here as something soft, gentle and luxurious. No nightmares here! Luckily for me, any time I dream, they tend to be happy ones. :)
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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What beautiful imagery! You posit dreams here as something soft, gentle and luxurious. No nightmares here! Luckily for me, any time I dream, they tend to be happy ones. :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much Navada!
Comment from RodG
This poem really creates a pleasant mood which readers of all ages can appreciate. Lavender dreams would certainly please me and keep me slumbering through the night. Your artwork could not be more appropriate. Rod
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This poem really creates a pleasant mood which readers of all ages can appreciate. Lavender dreams would certainly please me and keep me slumbering through the night. Your artwork could not be more appropriate. Rod
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hello Rod. Thanks so much!
Comment from kiwisteveh
I'm afraid my dreams are nothing like this - more of the stressful kind.
Lovely pic and poem presentation to enhance your pretty words. I like the structure too, with the 4-word tag-line adding a strong finish.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I'm afraid my dreams are nothing like this - more of the stressful kind.
Lovely pic and poem presentation to enhance your pretty words. I like the structure too, with the 4-word tag-line adding a strong finish.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much Steve!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, you managed to create quite a splendid mental picture with these few words, and I feel the 'wisps of slumber' as I read. Beautifully done, my friend. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Wow, you managed to create quite a splendid mental picture with these few words, and I feel the 'wisps of slumber' as I read. Beautifully done, my friend. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Very atmospheric and meditative post! Even mention of lavender, for me, is soothing and sleep-inducing. So this is a very relatable post which I enjoyed. Good luck! Debbie
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Very atmospheric and meditative post! Even mention of lavender, for me, is soothing and sleep-inducing. So this is a very relatable post which I enjoyed. Good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you Debbie.