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A third party for President 2024

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Comment from jim vecchio
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I had a friend that only drank on days that began with the letter "t"" Tuesday, Thursday, today and tomorrow. Did you know that Mae West and Groucho Marx went into a bar together? They both ordered a double entendre. Well, I better go. I have an excuse. I'm sick.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    I had a friend who quit drinking once the funnel was invented.
reply by jim vecchio on 14-Jan-2024
    I'm sorry I started this again.
Comment from Ulla
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Hehehe, Bill, you've done it again..this absolutely madness but what a lovely madness. Sometimes, I wonder whether they know what they're even talking about. I'm sure Pons doesn't have clue either.
I love it!. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Ulla
Comment from nomi338
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It is a beautiful poetry filld night where great poetry is a hit or miss occurrence. Great poetry hovers above the entire scene but refuses to alight, always in sight, but continuously out of reach. Frustrating, isn't it?

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Roses are read.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Ha, ha, ha this is so funny, no matter what somehow we get back to the hot question of to be or not to be a president:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Thanks, Iza
Comment from lyenochka
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These guys are making me fell that I'm drunk now.
But hooray if Ned really pops the question to Betty. Some guys need to drink first before making that kind of proposal, I guess?
I wonder if MauMau will run instead of LorDee?

the cantelope play. (cantaloupe)

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    I now know how to spell cantaloupe.
reply by lyenochka on 14-Jan-2024
    Lol. Don't ask my why it's spelled like that. Hope you get enough rest for your daily drives to the hospital.
    💖💖🙏
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Another totally incomprehensible discussion going on between these weird and wild characters. I enjoyed the rhyming sections and note that LorDee is soon to be ousted by MauMau as the new presidential hopeful if he doesn't get his act together. Other than that, just a lot of drunken nonsense, true to reality then! Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
    I do have an eventual place to be, but the full story requires a lot of character building.
Comment from kahpot
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Hi, Bill, I have a lot of catching up to do, but I am glad to be reading about these characters again, and getting used to their lingo, very well written, and I look forward to going back****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
    Thank you, kahpot. Have you been okay?
Comment from Navada
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So this is what happens when you put a band of disparate characters in a restaurant, introduce alcohol to the mix, and then let them out the back door? Interesting! Thanks for the share! :)

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
    People, right?
reply by Navada on 13-Jan-2024
    Yup! :)
Comment from BethShelby
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I think the whole crowd is very drunk. It doesn't appear that they are talking to each other. Mostly they are just talking. My favorite is MauMau. He or she suggested he/she should run for president and He or she agreed.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
    MauMau is a guy.