2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from aryr
The picture of the haiku was beautiful, Gypsy. Your words were astonishing as well as your narrative notes. Most children wonder where their gift comes from. Great picture. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
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The picture of the haiku was beautiful, Gypsy. Your words were astonishing as well as your narrative notes. Most children wonder where their gift comes from. Great picture. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from papa55mike
It's amazing what a difference a little kindness shown to a child to do in their recovery and their life. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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It's amazing what a difference a little kindness shown to a child to do in their recovery and their life. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
Enchanted Forests are always such magical places for children, and not any the less for those young ones with cancer.
An excellent message of hope here, Gypsy. Your presentation as always is sublime. :)
Gloria
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Enchanted Forests are always such magical places for children, and not any the less for those young ones with cancer.
An excellent message of hope here, Gypsy. Your presentation as always is sublime. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This reminds me of a child who has cancer. If a person has support and many prayers, it's a healing process. Is Enchanted Forest Park a place to visit or a place of healing?
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This reminds me of a child who has cancer. If a person has support and many prayers, it's a healing process. Is Enchanted Forest Park a place to visit or a place of healing?
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Is about children with terminal cancer and the make a wish foundation, a Disney nonprofit for kids
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Comment from royowen
Oh yes, the wish foundation is a marvel, an organisation the helps children fulfil a dream that they may have had, a very well organised and run society, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Oh yes, the wish foundation is a marvel, an organisation the helps children fulfil a dream that they may have had, a very well organised and run society, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Bless you
Comment from GWHARGIS
I'll bet that park is filled with hope and joy that day. It's a wonderful thing that Disney does for those who probably need it most. Beautiful and uplifting. Gretchen
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I'll bet that park is filled with hope and joy that day. It's a wonderful thing that Disney does for those who probably need it most. Beautiful and uplifting. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Hi! Happy New Year! This is an excellent and inspiring poem! I've always been fascinated by the Make A Wish Foundation, and have donated whatever I could, in past years. The image here perfectly matches your words also. Yes, when a child is given a chance to feel joy and made to feel important, so much good can happen. Excellent work!
Love,
Alexan :)
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Hi! Happy New Year! This is an excellent and inspiring poem! I've always been fascinated by the Make A Wish Foundation, and have donated whatever I could, in past years. The image here perfectly matches your words also. Yes, when a child is given a chance to feel joy and made to feel important, so much good can happen. Excellent work!
Love,
Alexan :)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much.
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Comment from shelley kaye
cute senryu! yea make-a-wish is a great org!
nice word choices and smooth flow and cute pic
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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cute senryu! yea make-a-wish is a great org!
nice word choices and smooth flow and cute pic
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much.
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Comment from Sugarray77
Gypsy, this is a lovely and heartwarming poem that you wrote in honor of the Make a Wish foundation. It is such a worthwhile group and makes so many children happy. Thank you for showcasing them today.
Melissa
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Gypsy, this is a lovely and heartwarming poem that you wrote in honor of the Make a Wish foundation. It is such a worthwhile group and makes so many children happy. Thank you for showcasing them today.
Melissa
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Thank you very much.
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Comment from patcelaw
It seems children do love field trips to various places. I enjoyed your point very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful day, and God bless. Patricia.
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It seems children do love field trips to various places. I enjoyed your point very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful day, and God bless. Patricia.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much.
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