2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "After All This Time"*
8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We do remember our first loves and often wonder where they're at or what their lives look like. Thank you for again, for sharing this wonderful poem and the beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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We do remember our first loves and often wonder where they're at or what their lives look like. Thank you for again, for sharing this wonderful poem and the beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and written wish a how great it could have been take. I write in a what was I thinking style. It's what I do, don't even try and feel giulty or miserable 40 years later!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and written wish a how great it could have been take. I write in a what was I thinking style. It's what I do, don't even try and feel giulty or miserable 40 years later!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful tanka, Gypsy. To paint a picture using only words is quite phenomenal and special to me. To add the picture of the flying doves is beyond words. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
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What a beautiful tanka, Gypsy. To paint a picture using only words is quite phenomenal and special to me. To add the picture of the flying doves is beyond words. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
That's such a lovely poem of devotion to a beloved that's no longer there. Those cozy winter nights, those doves in flight all bring memories. I really liked "you're still woven into my thoughts".
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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That's such a lovely poem of devotion to a beloved that's no longer there. Those cozy winter nights, those doves in flight all bring memories. I really liked "you're still woven into my thoughts".
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm glad you like it.
Love
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
harvesting doves at sunset... cool pic!
great romantic tanka suite about the one who got away...
love the "woven in my thoughts" line - great ending!
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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harvesting doves at sunset... cool pic!
great romantic tanka suite about the one who got away...
love the "woven in my thoughts" line - great ending!
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading this. I like the words you use. Also. The pictures go well with the words. The doves add a warmth to the poem. Great job. The different colors you use make the poem stand out.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed reading this. I like the words you use. Also. The pictures go well with the words. The doves add a warmth to the poem. Great job. The different colors you use make the poem stand out.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much Brenda.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Julie Helms
This poem has lovely imagery, a beautiful flow, and such nostalgia for a time, a love, a memory from the past. You use the color font and pictures to great effect with your poem. However, I don't think you even need to have that as your words are so beautifully descriptive.
Thanks for sharing! Julie.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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This poem has lovely imagery, a beautiful flow, and such nostalgia for a time, a love, a memory from the past. You use the color font and pictures to great effect with your poem. However, I don't think you even need to have that as your words are so beautifully descriptive.
Thanks for sharing! Julie.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Julie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Navada
I enjoyed the imagery here of interweaving and the contrasts between heat and cold as a tribute to your former love. The dove imagery, both written and visual, is also really beautiful. :)
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I enjoyed the imagery here of interweaving and the contrasts between heat and cold as a tribute to your former love. The dove imagery, both written and visual, is also really beautiful. :)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, navada.
Gypsy hugs