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A third party for President 2024

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Comment from BethShelby
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Thats is about as confusing as anything which involve people who want to be the president. I think they should all be taken into custody as suspects.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Arrest them, and the one who bail herself out gets the nod.
Comment from Navada
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The really frightening thing about this very enjoyable and funny read is that I can totally imagine it happening in the White House after 2016. :) (And at sundry other times throughout history as well, I suspect!) :)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Fact is always stranger than fiction.
Comment from nomi338
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That you could conceive of, write this all down, and keep it semi organized, says a lot about you, your mental state/acumen, and that you have avoided so far at least, being locked away in some sort of mental facility. Is just awesome.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
    I have a key and leave at night.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. What a lot of conversations are going on. I think Betty and Ned have taken to heart Pons' tip on practicing the states in alphabetical order! MauMau should learn the difference between cities and states. Hope the food is good at Luigi's!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Luigi?s is the best!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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I had a good laugh, trying to get past the inconvenience of not having states with all the letters, and that's how Boston becomes a state:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Iza
Comment from RFL
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A very creative satirical depiction of our current events! I thought your scene was very funny and absolutely enjoyable. Let's go to Luigis!

Regards,
RFL

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Salute!
Comment from Ulla
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Hahahaha, oh, Bill, you make me laugh so hard. You just take the mickey out of it all. It's such a farce. I wish the real politicians could see it that way as well. I can't wait to reading on. All the sixes I don't have. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from royowen
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Heh heh the gang are back with a different people and on of them plans to be a Poet Laureate, actually I must admit I don't know what a poet laureate is I think ts the official state poet, great script Bill, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Thanks, Roy
reply by royowen on 09-Jan-2024
    A pleasure