Leaving Eden
an eighty word challenge6 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When we are tempted by Satan things are uncontrollable. The tree of knowledge is the apple tree. The fig tree was questionable, they thought they ate of the fig tree. It's difficult to write a story of eighty words.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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When we are tempted by Satan things are uncontrollable. The tree of knowledge is the apple tree. The fig tree was questionable, they thought they ate of the fig tree. It's difficult to write a story of eighty words.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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I used the fig as a ploy where Adam didn?t have to leave but knowing humanity would be their responsibility he feigned eating what Eve did and went coluntarily
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL
I love your interpretation of this particular moment in history. I think we've all wondered about how that all went down. I like thinking about it like this - He didn't let the door hit us on my a**.
Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest,
~MP~
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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LOL
I love your interpretation of this particular moment in history. I think we've all wondered about how that all went down. I like thinking about it like this - He didn't let the door hit us on my a**.
Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest,
~MP~
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Demanding a short interpretation I did what I could with the
Limited words
Thank you
Comment from royowen
This is a great twist on the original version, an excellent post my friend, I suppose the real problem wasn't the sex, as a lot of people think, they were married, but the disobeyed the eating of the fruit, once they were acquainted with sin, that had fallen, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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This is a great twist on the original version, an excellent post my friend, I suppose the real problem wasn't the sex, as a lot of people think, they were married, but the disobeyed the eating of the fruit, once they were acquainted with sin, that had fallen, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Happy New Year and thanks for your continuous reads and comments
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My pleasure
Comment from Navada
I quite like God's casual language and the decision to keep his wife happy leading poor old Adam to get kicked out. "No more free meals" has a delicious twist of irony under the circumstances! :)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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I quite like God's casual language and the decision to keep his wife happy leading poor old Adam to get kicked out. "No more free meals" has a delicious twist of irony under the circumstances! :)
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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With an eighty-word limitation one has to maximize what is said quickly. Happy New Year.
Comment from Sabrina H.
Very interesting take of Adam and Eve leaving the garden. Beautiful picture too. The grammar and structure was good. Best of luck with the contest.
Keep writing :)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
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Very interesting take of Adam and Eve leaving the garden. Beautiful picture too. The grammar and structure was good. Best of luck with the contest.
Keep writing :)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
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I thought everyone had left town
Thanks for leading the action
Comment from Julie Helms
I imagine they were surprised at the turn of events! I enjoyed this more light-hearted version of the fall of mankind. Best of luck with the contest and Happy New Year!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
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I imagine they were surprised at the turn of events! I enjoyed this more light-hearted version of the fall of mankind. Best of luck with the contest and Happy New Year!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
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And it took only 15 minutes thank you