Not Welcome
It was too late for him.6 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Congratulations on your win. I found this story interesting.
I'm wondering if the wife thought he had perished or had just run off hoping everyone thought he had died at sea.
I ask this because less than three months and she had already moved on.
If the man I loved , the man of my life died I would still be mourning after only three months.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Ciao!
Congratulations on your win. I found this story interesting.
I'm wondering if the wife thought he had perished or had just run off hoping everyone thought he had died at sea.
I ask this because less than three months and she had already moved on.
If the man I loved , the man of my life died I would still be mourning after only three months.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Well, maybe that high school sweetheart was lurking for awhile, just maybe... Thanks for the read and feedback.
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It's with the woman I have an issue ...
she had already moved on less than three months after her husband "died".
She couldn't have been that in love with him.
All the best for the New Year.
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Right!
Comment from RFL
An interesting submission for the Flash Fiction Contest. You were able to condense what could be a short story into a short summary and unexpected ending. Kudos to you.
RFL
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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An interesting submission for the Flash Fiction Contest. You were able to condense what could be a short story into a short summary and unexpected ending. Kudos to you.
RFL
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Mustang Patty
wow - didn't actually see that coming. I think you managed to convey the theme of the contest in a cohesive story - good luck to you.
Thank you for sharing,
~MP~
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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wow - didn't actually see that coming. I think you managed to convey the theme of the contest in a cohesive story - good luck to you.
Thank you for sharing,
~MP~
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thanks for the read and the response. Appreciated.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The accompanying picture completes the scene naturally, and the story told though brief is a well-written short story. Well done, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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The accompanying picture completes the scene naturally, and the story told though brief is a well-written short story. Well done, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
I guess the fisherman has a new story about the one that got away. I don't blame his ex for moving on. Great story. It really holds the reader's attention.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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I guess the fisherman has a new story about the one that got away. I don't blame his ex for moving on. Great story. It really holds the reader's attention.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Got that right. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Janis M.
A surprise for them both! I love the picture along with this, but it could stand on its own too. I could absolutely see every woman with arms folded in the kitchen saying too little too late. Good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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A surprise for them both! I love the picture along with this, but it could stand on its own too. I could absolutely see every woman with arms folded in the kitchen saying too little too late. Good luck.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thought this little story might appeal to the ladies. Thanks for the read and feedback.