Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 75 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter 75"A hidden past, a devastating truth.
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Comment from Gerard F Keogh
That takes great discipline to write a full-length novel and I applaud you for it as you have a better sense of concentration and perseverance. It looks to be a long and twisting interesting read. You have improved since then, I would say. the chapter I just read would give credence to that statement. regards GK
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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That takes great discipline to write a full-length novel and I applaud you for it as you have a better sense of concentration and perseverance. It looks to be a long and twisting interesting read. You have improved since then, I would say. the chapter I just read would give credence to that statement. regards GK
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from karenina
Holy psychopath batman. Michelle sounds unhinged. Killing, burning...she'll find a way back to be with...ANGELA.... Not to see Angela and Paul? I have a very bad feeling about this! The woman has lost all touch with reality!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Holy psychopath batman. Michelle sounds unhinged. Killing, burning...she'll find a way back to be with...ANGELA.... Not to see Angela and Paul? I have a very bad feeling about this! The woman has lost all touch with reality!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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So good! When does the next book start?
(No pressure....LOL)
Comment from Daylily
The intrigue continues. The emotional effect on Angela is well presented and the reader feels alarm right along with her.
A small typo here:
'Yes, but do you think he would've just dropped this if we'd let him go. Of course not, Angela. I'm sorry I left you like that, but I had to get out of the country. But I'm sorting things out, I'm trying to arrange a new identity so I'll be able to come back in a sort (short?) while, and then perhaps, we can get together.'
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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The intrigue continues. The emotional effect on Angela is well presented and the reader feels alarm right along with her.
A small typo here:
'Yes, but do you think he would've just dropped this if we'd let him go. Of course not, Angela. I'm sorry I left you like that, but I had to get out of the country. But I'm sorting things out, I'm trying to arrange a new identity so I'll be able to come back in a sort (short?) while, and then perhaps, we can get together.'
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
We've got burned out vehicles burned bodies a murder. Wow a smashing chapter! It's getting real exciting now! Things are gearing up! Very exciting keep on writing. I see no issues with grammar spelling punctuation or subject matter. A great submission and have a great new year!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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We've got burned out vehicles burned bodies a murder. Wow a smashing chapter! It's getting real exciting now! Things are gearing up! Very exciting keep on writing. I see no issues with grammar spelling punctuation or subject matter. A great submission and have a great new year!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A risky business ringing Angela and saying so much on the phone. At least Michelle didn't say where she was. But if the police start investigating her involvement, her phone calls will be of particular interest. Small edit: I'll be able to come back in a s(h)ort while. Thanks for sharing, Jacob. Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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A risky business ringing Angela and saying so much on the phone. At least Michelle didn't say where she was. But if the police start investigating her involvement, her phone calls will be of particular interest. Small edit: I'll be able to come back in a s(h)ort while. Thanks for sharing, Jacob. Debbie
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Thank you Debbie.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Won't Michelle know that it was Angela who turned her in? It seems only logical. I am also wondering if Michelle didn't die in this fire. Maybe William is still alive, and not Michelle. Another good write.
Will Michelle have made sure that the police don't find anything that could connect the body to us? & Michelle will never need to know that it was me who spoke to them, (you can omit 'that')
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Won't Michelle know that it was Angela who turned her in? It seems only logical. I am also wondering if Michelle didn't die in this fire. Maybe William is still alive, and not Michelle. Another good write.
Will Michelle have made sure that the police don't find anything that could connect the body to us? & Michelle will never need to know that it was me who spoke to them, (you can omit 'that')
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from BethShelby
This can't be good. Her time to speak you was before someone died. Phone calls can be traced. I would almost hope it was a women's body in the van. Either way, I can't imagine this ever ending well. I wondered why she mentioned Rebecca possibly wanting to know who her real father was. I thought she thought Paul was her real father.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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This can't be good. Her time to speak you was before someone died. Phone calls can be traced. I would almost hope it was a women's body in the van. Either way, I can't imagine this ever ending well. I wondered why she mentioned Rebecca possibly wanting to know who her real father was. I thought she thought Paul was her real father.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Hi Beth. No William is Rebecca's biological father and Paul is her step-father.
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I new that but I just didn't know if she knew it. Beth