Me. Her. Him
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Comment from Daylily
Panic can cause people to head in the wrong direction and wind up in more trouble. You are sharing these characters emotions and that is good for the readers. Your writing makes a fast paced and interesting story.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Panic can cause people to head in the wrong direction and wind up in more trouble. You are sharing these characters emotions and that is good for the readers. Your writing makes a fast paced and interesting story.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That's very sinister.
Really like that last closing statement. A very cool cliff hanger going on there so I guess more interesting. I said call along and it was already good the begin with! I see no issues with grammar esthetics, subject matter punctuation. Another great entry enjoy your holiday!
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
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That's very sinister.
Really like that last closing statement. A very cool cliff hanger going on there so I guess more interesting. I said call along and it was already good the begin with! I see no issues with grammar esthetics, subject matter punctuation. Another great entry enjoy your holiday!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from karenina
Ew. So, Michelle is the one with the major creep factor. A regular psychopath. Lives are dispensable. The ends justify the means. She'd...a terror! Angela has bought into the cover-up murder scheme...when in fact not a soul could have jumped to that conclusion. William is a threat...Michelle is evil!
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Ew. So, Michelle is the one with the major creep factor. A regular psychopath. Lives are dispensable. The ends justify the means. She'd...a terror! Angela has bought into the cover-up murder scheme...when in fact not a soul could have jumped to that conclusion. William is a threat...Michelle is evil!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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Welcome!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Michelle was trying to have Angela all to herself. I sure Angela sees it now. I am wondering how this will play out after they dispose of William, or will Angela back out of it. Good write.
driver's seat next to me. (beside me)
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Michelle was trying to have Angela all to herself. I sure Angela sees it now. I am wondering how this will play out after they dispose of William, or will Angela back out of it. Good write.
driver's seat next to me. (beside me)
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Michelle's arguably more calculating and sinister than William. She's definitely prepared to groom and secure Angela for herself, away from family and friends. Just one question - "In my head I hear her telling me..." Is that Caz or Michelle she's hearing? Also edit: "You(r) family, Lauren and Hayley, my parents.." Excellent continuation! Thanks for the share. Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Michelle's arguably more calculating and sinister than William. She's definitely prepared to groom and secure Angela for herself, away from family and friends. Just one question - "In my head I hear her telling me..." Is that Caz or Michelle she's hearing? Also edit: "You(r) family, Lauren and Hayley, my parents.." Excellent continuation! Thanks for the share. Debbie
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you Debbie.
Comment from BethShelby
Something like that would pretty much never be off Angela's mind. She knew it would ruin her life. I can't imagine many people consenting to something like they did. It would have been easier to take a change that the police could have be convinced it was an accident.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Something like that would pretty much never be off Angela's mind. She knew it would ruin her life. I can't imagine many people consenting to something like they did. It would have been easier to take a change that the police could have be convinced it was an accident.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you Beth.
Comment from Navada
This is taking more and more of a sinister turn. Angela must now really be fearing for her safety on several fronts. Michelle is one to be watched as much as William.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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This is taking more and more of a sinister turn. Angela must now really be fearing for her safety on several fronts. Michelle is one to be watched as much as William.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you.