Poetry Beyond the Ordinary
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's not a good thing when a couple can't agree on anything. It seems to bring out the worst in both people. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
Sometimes fast but mostly so.(slow??)
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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It's not a good thing when a couple can't agree on anything. It seems to bring out the worst in both people. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
Sometimes fast but mostly so.(slow??)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara for your time here and yes it is very true we do not get along and we have some things in common but not enough.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from JSD
Another excellent little piece of prose/poetry from you Ricky. Really enjoyed this one with its repetition and circling structure. Well done and have a Happy Christmas.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Another excellent little piece of prose/poetry from you Ricky. Really enjoyed this one with its repetition and circling structure. Well done and have a Happy Christmas.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Perhaps it is inappropriate for Christmas but it is actually and unfortunately candy appropriate for my current marriage.
Doctor Ricky