Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Caz is very immature isn't she and I think she should, at least, try to bond with Rebecca. But maybe she is suffering from post-natal depression. This was always coming and in such a short piece you did an excellent job, Jacob! Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023

Thank you Debbie.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

I have to (reluctantly) respect Caz for realizing she is not "Mom" material and for reaching out to Angela. This seems to explain how Angela became Rebecca's mom (whether legally adopted or not)--

How Michelle fit into "taking care" of William...and what became of Caz?

Let me guess.

Read on!

Karenina

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Thank you Karenina.

reply by karenina on 22-Dec-2023

Thank you, Jacob.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I hope you tell Michelle the truth when you walk back inside. Okay, now I see how Angela got Rebecca. But we still don't know what happened to Caz, or how William fits back into the picture. I do really like this story.

Now I can see tears in her eyes. (Now I see tears in her eyes)

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Thank you Barbara.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Well at least Caz doesn't plan to be a mother to Revecca and we know that Angela did take her her. Now it is a matter of finding out what happened to Caz after that happened.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023

Thank you Beth.