Comment from karenina

Excellent

Oh, Angela! You hate his secrets but look at your own! This couple needs to unburden themselves to one another...

Paul may well be paying out thinking he is protecting his wife.

It's delicious not knowing!
Karenina

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023

Thank you Karenina.

reply by karenina on 17-Dec-2023

Welcome!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Just to say, your background notes are so comprehensive and useful when it comes to reminding the reader of dates and general information (I forgot how far back this story went). I like this chapter a lot! It's got some great tension and pace with the phone search and the panic when the toilet flushed. All very palpable. And now we have mystery surrounding those payments. No errors noted and a tense and enjoyable read! Well done, Jacob! Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023

Thank you Debbie.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

The plot thickens. These two need open communication. I can't wait until you put all of this together. Thank you for sharing. I like this story.

If I don't hear from her within the next couple of days I'm going to have to take matters into my own hands. (comma after 'days' because you started the sentence with 'If')

If you can get the payment over to me by the end of this week that'll be smashing xxx (comma after 'week')

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023

Thank you Barbara.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Now, it sounds as though Paul is hiding something too. I wonder if it somehow connects with what is going on with Angela. I'm glad you are posting often.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023

Thank you Beth.