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Me. Her. Him

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A hidden past, a devastating truth.

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Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Ooh and the twists snd turns continue! Never say never I guess. I wonder what you're up to in your book it's got me curious now Even more than I was. Once again, you put out another cool chapter which I find entertaining and leaves me with. What's going on questions which is a good thing! Another fine entry best of luck to you Hope you have an amazing day!

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
    Thank you Lea.
Comment from karenina
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How odd! Two years, nearly, and Caz comes running to Angela!

It's looking like William is behind her desperate state...

Or is there some other more nefarious reason for her to show up?

You do keep me guessing!

Karenina


 Comment Written 14-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
    Thank you Karenina.
reply by karenina on 14-Dec-2023
    Thank you...
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Well that's a turn up for the book and one's first thought is that she's suffered abuse at the hands of that untrustworthy William. No matter what preceded this between her and Angela, it's absolutely credible that the two would embrace at this point. No errors noted. Debbie

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
    Thank you Debbie.
Comment from BethShelby
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I guess that would be cold to turn someone away who sees you as their only hope and looks as if the are in deep trouble. I hope no one does he any harm but I can't be sure of that since we already know that William believe that Angela and Michele did something to her.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
    Thank you Beth.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Okay, what's Caz doing there and in that state? Did she finally realize William is a horrible person? I have all sorts of questions. Now, I can't wait to find out what going on.

How on earth can you post two posts a day? I struggle getting one post a week.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
    Thank you. My book is written. It doesn?t take me long to set it all up. I normally post during my lunch break if I can and then when I?m at home in the evening.
reply by barbara.wilkey on 13-Dec-2023
    Makes since. Mine is written too, but I still edit it daily.