Me. Her. Him
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Comment from karenina
Oh, man. This is rife with betrayal! Such good writing here...
The options are still there.
Cad could be playing the innocent wronged woman.
William is a creep, and likely A thief...
Michelle could have her own reasons to keep Angela beholden to her generosity...
Love this.
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Oh, man. This is rife with betrayal! Such good writing here...
The options are still there.
Cad could be playing the innocent wronged woman.
William is a creep, and likely A thief...
Michelle could have her own reasons to keep Angela beholden to her generosity...
Love this.
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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You're so welcome.
Comment from BethShelby
It isn't surprising that William didn't attempt to break up with Caz. It seemly likely she would believe it was Angela that going after William. You story makes wish I didn't have to wait until you post again.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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It isn't surprising that William didn't attempt to break up with Caz. It seemly likely she would believe it was Angela that going after William. You story makes wish I didn't have to wait until you post again.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Thank you Beth.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Somebody should have set Caz straight on what William was up too. She'll never get the truth from him. Of course, Angela should have been the one to tell her, but I can understand why it was hard for her. This is a good write.
I was fully expecting Michelle (passive it need to be active - I fully expected Michelle)
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Somebody should have set Caz straight on what William was up too. She'll never get the truth from him. Of course, Angela should have been the one to tell her, but I can understand why it was hard for her. This is a good write.
I was fully expecting Michelle (passive it need to be active - I fully expected Michelle)
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Did you notice how quickly I picked this up?:) Now I'm beginning to wonder about Michelle. Why is she being so sympathetic and supportive? Something's not quite as it seems perhaps. You're really keeping us guessing here, Jacob. No errors detected and another intriguing chapter. But surely the police wouldn't be investigating this without CCTV evidence etc.? Looking forward to the next chapter. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Did you notice how quickly I picked this up?:) Now I'm beginning to wonder about Michelle. Why is she being so sympathetic and supportive? Something's not quite as it seems perhaps. You're really keeping us guessing here, Jacob. No errors detected and another intriguing chapter. But surely the police wouldn't be investigating this without CCTV evidence etc.? Looking forward to the next chapter. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you Debbie.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Always the issue. The problem with thieves liars and borrowing money always a bad mix. You have quite a web here. Keep it up. Keep writing. I look forward to more! I don't see any issues with grammar or punctuation or sentence structure. I think it's a good job!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Always the issue. The problem with thieves liars and borrowing money always a bad mix. You have quite a web here. Keep it up. Keep writing. I look forward to more! I don't see any issues with grammar or punctuation or sentence structure. I think it's a good job!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea.
