Me. Her. Him
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Comment from karenina
I'm anxious for some action now. Two "pacing" chapters in a row leave me hungry for some red meat!
On with the party!
Oh--just a sidenote:
*"Home Alone is a classic,' I say, even though it was only released a few years ago."
(Actually it was released
on Nov 16th 1990--so about a decade ago)
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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I'm anxious for some action now. Two "pacing" chapters in a row leave me hungry for some red meat!
On with the party!
Oh--just a sidenote:
*"Home Alone is a classic,' I say, even though it was only released a few years ago."
(Actually it was released
on Nov 16th 1990--so about a decade ago)
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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Warmest holiday greetings, Jacob!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Yes, it sucks when a person has to make a choice. Given the nature of your book, very tough choice. You written this very well once again keeping us engaged. Nothing gays. I appreciate the nature of your character's tooth. They're very human which makes it a believable read so great job. Hope you have an awesome evening!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Yes, it sucks when a person has to make a choice. Given the nature of your book, very tough choice. You written this very well once again keeping us engaged. Nothing gays. I appreciate the nature of your character's tooth. They're very human which makes it a believable read so great job. Hope you have an awesome evening!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Such girly conversations, perfectly pitched with even that choice of Home Alone which seems to be my daughter's choice every year and she's 40 now! Michelle is as temperamental as ever and Angela is so nervous around her. No errors noted. Another well expressed chapter, Jacob! Well done Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Such girly conversations, perfectly pitched with even that choice of Home Alone which seems to be my daughter's choice every year and she's 40 now! Michelle is as temperamental as ever and Angela is so nervous around her. No errors noted. Another well expressed chapter, Jacob! Well done Debbie
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you Debbie.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Is this party where all the trouble starts. You're building it up quite a bit, so I am guessing it is. I can't wait to read more.
red baubles (UK spelling?)
'Whatever you say,' I grin, a (period after 'say.' grin is not a speech tag)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Is this party where all the trouble starts. You're building it up quite a bit, so I am guessing it is. I can't wait to read more.
red baubles (UK spelling?)
'Whatever you say,' I grin, a (period after 'say.' grin is not a speech tag)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from patcelaw
This is another well written chapter in your book, and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. And I wish you the very best with your book. Patricia.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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This is another well written chapter in your book, and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. And I wish you the very best with your book. Patricia.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you.