Never Say Never
Fear panic hatred of blood4 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
This is a cool poem. It's almost free verse, but I see end rhymes, and yet there's not a definitive pattern to the rhyme that I can see. But mostly, I think this poem is cool because of the topic. It tells a story, and with it, it seems to enforce the poet's firm decision to "never be a nurse." I like it!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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This is a cool poem. It's almost free verse, but I see end rhymes, and yet there's not a definitive pattern to the rhyme that I can see. But mostly, I think this poem is cool because of the topic. It tells a story, and with it, it seems to enforce the poet's firm decision to "never be a nurse." I like it!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Aiona.
Comment from patricia dillon
The title is right. One should never say never. Some of what nurses do may seem daunting, but it is possibly the most worthwhile job. But good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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The title is right. One should never say never. Some of what nurses do may seem daunting, but it is possibly the most worthwhile job. But good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Patricia. I have two sisters-in-law who are nurses. Me? panic first, think way down the track. Nursing is indeed a skill. Thank you for the review, and the pointer about the title
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You're welcome
Comment from JSD
You respond to the prompt really well here. This is light-hearted and yet heartfelt, and, to be honest, I agree entirely with your cry. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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You respond to the prompt really well here. This is light-hearted and yet heartfelt, and, to be honest, I agree entirely with your cry. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
Comment from Yusita
A unique write on a unique topic. I think this is a worthy entry for the Repetition writing prompt. I also must add that I can relate to it. I've never been good at handling bloody situations or anything that is more than a scratch or average bruise. Anyhow, a very good piece.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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A unique write on a unique topic. I think this is a worthy entry for the Repetition writing prompt. I also must add that I can relate to it. I've never been good at handling bloody situations or anything that is more than a scratch or average bruise. Anyhow, a very good piece.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Golly, I am glad I'm not alone! Thank you for the lovely review
