Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter 35"A hidden past, a devastating truth.
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Comment from karenina
Oh, it's these slightest of smooth moves that tip the scale from idle flirting to something far more sizzling...and dangerous. William seems menacing in a psychological way. He's creepy!
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Oh, it's these slightest of smooth moves that tip the scale from idle flirting to something far more sizzling...and dangerous. William seems menacing in a psychological way. He's creepy!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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You bet!
Comment from Janis M.
The description of the budding feelings of desire is fairly accurate. It is always the little touches in the beginning that bring the most excitement. And it is that unfortunately that blinds us from very obvious red flags...where people start to make excuses for people they know is wrong, such as selling drugs.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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The description of the budding feelings of desire is fairly accurate. It is always the little touches in the beginning that bring the most excitement. And it is that unfortunately that blinds us from very obvious red flags...where people start to make excuses for people they know is wrong, such as selling drugs.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you Janis.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We're not sure where this is leading, but we know that William is Caz's boyfriend and Angela is a rival, also we know that Caz disappears at some point, so this sounds rather suspicious. I expect you will offload the bombshell of this story eventually and we are all waiting in anticipation Jacob, another fine chapter with some authentic dialogue, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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We're not sure where this is leading, but we know that William is Caz's boyfriend and Angela is a rival, also we know that Caz disappears at some point, so this sounds rather suspicious. I expect you will offload the bombshell of this story eventually and we are all waiting in anticipation Jacob, another fine chapter with some authentic dialogue, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from BethShelby
Angela is always trying to figure out what others might be thinking. It does appear that William is making a play for her and she is enjoying it. Yes, she is worried about what her friends will think and what Caz might think if she finds out. I'm glad you post often.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Angela is always trying to figure out what others might be thinking. It does appear that William is making a play for her and she is enjoying it. Yes, she is worried about what her friends will think and what Caz might think if she finds out. I'm glad you post often.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you Beth.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
William is making a play for Angela. Wondering what's going on with Caz. It was already interesting but getting for so. Thank you for sharing.
holding up her glass of wine, the ice clinking against the side of her glass. (didn't know one puts ice in their wine)
'I'm trying, you know I am,' Lauren says. She says it in a jokey way, although I can see the hurt in her eyes from Hayley's comment. (smoother - Lauren says it in a jokey way,)
He's sitting next to me now. (sitting beside me now.)
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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William is making a play for Angela. Wondering what's going on with Caz. It was already interesting but getting for so. Thank you for sharing.
holding up her glass of wine, the ice clinking against the side of her glass. (didn't know one puts ice in their wine)
'I'm trying, you know I am,' Lauren says. She says it in a jokey way, although I can see the hurt in her eyes from Hayley's comment. (smoother - Lauren says it in a jokey way,)
He's sitting next to me now. (sitting beside me now.)
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara. Someone I know even puts ice in red wine. I can put ice in white, but not in red.