2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 117 "Sun Dances on the Water"x
9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
What a beautiful image you gave me with this haiku. I enjoyed this.
Great presentation.to match your words.
It is an Enchanting read. So well done.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
What a beautiful image you gave me with this haiku. I enjoyed this.
Great presentation.to match your words.
It is an Enchanting read. So well done.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a beautiful haiku - another of my favorites of yours with such lovely imagery. I wish I could write these as effortlessly as you seem to. The personification is great, and the last line is perfect.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
This is a beautiful haiku - another of my favorites of yours with such lovely imagery. I wish I could write these as effortlessly as you seem to. The personification is great, and the last line is perfect.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I appreciate the congratulation!
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I love the idea of the sun dancing on the water. What a beautiful image. Thank you for sharing that image with me/us. I'm sure the moon doesn't mind. He's a forgiving fellow. LOL
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
I love the idea of the sun dancing on the water. What a beautiful image. Thank you for sharing that image with me/us. I'm sure the moon doesn't mind. He's a forgiving fellow. LOL
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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LoL yeah, the moon doesn't mind. (*÷*)
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Likely native Americans would appreciate your Haiku too - sun dancing, moon sleeps, etc. Nicely done! Artwork complements your few well-wriiten poem.
Mark
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
Gypsy,
Likely native Americans would appreciate your Haiku too - sun dancing, moon sleeps, etc. Nicely done! Artwork complements your few well-wriiten poem.
Mark
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from aryr
What a beautiful scene this portrays, wonderful haiku, Gypsy. Your words created that scene. This was brilliant. Your wonderful haiku created such creative beauty with the sounds and smells. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
What a beautiful scene this portrays, wonderful haiku, Gypsy. Your words created that scene. This was brilliant. Your wonderful haiku created such creative beauty with the sounds and smells. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
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You are most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This put me in a place. I could hear the water, feel the night breeze and feel the freedom of the moment. This was a quiet yet powerful poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
This put me in a place. I could hear the water, feel the night breeze and feel the freedom of the moment. This was a quiet yet powerful poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from shelley kaye
beautiful imagery in this
love the sun dancing on the water under a sleeping moon
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
beautiful imagery in this
love the sun dancing on the water under a sleeping moon
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful picture and wonderful personification of our biggest lights in the sky - the sun and the moon! I love seeing the sparkling that the sun creates while dancing on the water!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
Beautiful picture and wonderful personification of our biggest lights in the sky - the sun and the moon! I love seeing the sparkling that the sun creates while dancing on the water!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it.
Love
Marival
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Once again, a stunningly beautiful image reflected in this skilfully evocative verse with gentle sounds, warmth and subdued light creating, for me, quite a meditative sensation. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
Once again, a stunningly beautiful image reflected in this skilfully evocative verse with gentle sounds, warmth and subdued light creating, for me, quite a meditative sensation. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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