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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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What a beautiful image you gave me with this haiku. I enjoyed this.
Great presentation.to match your words.
It is an Enchanting read. So well done.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a beautiful haiku - another of my favorites of yours with such lovely imagery. I wish I could write these as effortlessly as you seem to. The personification is great, and the last line is perfect.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I appreciate the congratulation!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I love the idea of the sun dancing on the water. What a beautiful image. Thank you for sharing that image with me/us. I'm sure the moon doesn't mind. He's a forgiving fellow. LOL

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
    LoL yeah, the moon doesn't mind. (*÷*)

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Likely native Americans would appreciate your Haiku too - sun dancing, moon sleeps, etc. Nicely done! Artwork complements your few well-wriiten poem.

Mark

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a beautiful scene this portrays, wonderful haiku, Gypsy. Your words created that scene. This was brilliant. Your wonderful haiku created such creative beauty with the sounds and smells. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 30-Nov-2023
    You are most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This put me in a place. I could hear the water, feel the night breeze and feel the freedom of the moment. This was a quiet yet powerful poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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beautiful imagery in this
love the sun dancing on the water under a sleeping moon

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Beautiful picture and wonderful personification of our biggest lights in the sky - the sun and the moon! I love seeing the sparkling that the sun creates while dancing on the water!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it.

    Love

    Marival
    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Once again, a stunningly beautiful image reflected in this skilfully evocative verse with gentle sounds, warmth and subdued light creating, for me, quite a meditative sensation. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs