Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter 25"A hidden past, a devastating truth.
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
And the plot thickens! You have some jealousy going on there. Old friends showing up in there on the custom territory.
Im gonna have to keep reading to see what's going on! No issues with grammar sentence structure puncti. Think you're gonna another nice submission here and a great addition to your book. Hope you have a great night!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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And the plot thickens! You have some jealousy going on there. Old friends showing up in there on the custom territory.
Im gonna have to keep reading to see what's going on! No issues with grammar sentence structure puncti. Think you're gonna another nice submission here and a great addition to your book. Hope you have a great night!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Michelle sounds like a very manipulating person and you can't dictate to another person who to spend time with or not. I wonder what the real reason is why Michelle does not like Caz, there sounds more to it than meets the eye. Another fine chapters Jacob and you describe these realistic conversations and thoughts, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Michelle sounds like a very manipulating person and you can't dictate to another person who to spend time with or not. I wonder what the real reason is why Michelle does not like Caz, there sounds more to it than meets the eye. Another fine chapters Jacob and you describe these realistic conversations and thoughts, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from karenina
Michelle seems to be way over the top about this whole Caz thing. I'm imagining there must be history you've yet to share...and it's going to be interesting! Odd bit, about Angela's spine tingling at the thought of seeing Caz again. Foreshadowing? Hmmmm.
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> "Its Michelle's ponytail < should be *It's*
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Michelle seems to be way over the top about this whole Caz thing. I'm imagining there must be history you've yet to share...and it's going to be interesting! Odd bit, about Angela's spine tingling at the thought of seeing Caz again. Foreshadowing? Hmmmm.
One edit"
> "Its Michelle's ponytail < should be *It's*
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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Welcome, Jacob!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have a feeling Michelle knows something and it affects what's happening at the beginning of the story. Only the rest of us don't know what it is. I can't wait to find out. This is a good story.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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I have a feeling Michelle knows something and it affects what's happening at the beginning of the story. Only the rest of us don't know what it is. I can't wait to find out. This is a good story.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from BethShelby
I wonder what Michelle senses about Caz that the rest of the group don't see. Maybe she is jealouse of Angela making a new friend when whe wants to remain her best friend. I waiting for the them to meet again and for William to make his appearance.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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I wonder what Michelle senses about Caz that the rest of the group don't see. Maybe she is jealouse of Angela making a new friend when whe wants to remain her best friend. I waiting for the them to meet again and for William to make his appearance.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you Beth, William will be appearing soon.