Comment from Mark D. R.

Exceptional

This is an exquisite Gypsy! You chose perfect artwork to pair with your poem for your Haiku club entry presentation.

Quite the metamorphic allusion - the social butterfly flittering about. I would get the same feeling if you had chose a hummingbird.

Mark

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review!

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Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hola Guapa, I just loved this haiku for the club entry. The imagery is outstanding. A social butterfly, indeed. I will be looking forward to post my own contribution. Un abrazo, Ulla xx

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023

Hola, guapa,

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Your words simply delight. Who doesn't enjoy the social butterfly that flits around a summer party, charming everyone? This image makes for a lovely Haiku.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Tina Crute

Excellent

What a lovely thought, as butterflies do seem to enjoy flitting around in the sunshine. I am quite the introvert, so I do not enjoy a tremendous amount of social interaction, but many of my friends are true "butterflies." I love your analogy here.
Well done!
Tina

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

I hear you, I'm an introverted person too (*=*) I'm more of a fly on the wall. LoL

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I see a beautiful metaphor in this poem. I have to step back and remember the awe on my three-year-old granddaughter's face when a butterfly almost touched her arm yesterday. She's seen them before, but still, there's awe.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Aw... I can visualize the butterfly kisses on your three years grandaughter's face. Kids are so precious at that age.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

So absolutely brilliant
with the written word -
haiku master

For me, when a haiku is done just right, I feel this sense of peace and breathing room in my solar plexis. This gorgeous entry of yours left me with that sensation. Thank you. (Love the artwork, too!!) For me, this is perfection. xo

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Rachel,

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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reply by Rachelle Allen on 25-Nov-2023

So totally my pleasure!!

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi MariVal,
This is a good take on the picture for the haiku club post.
It shows one of the non literal meanings for butterfly.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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reply by dragonpoet on 25-Nov-2023

Don't mention it, MariVal.
Joan

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Butterflies do become social as they flutter their wings to and from a flower. Your poem is magnificent. Love the colors; very festive and delightful.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

me standing in a corner w a t c h i n g
the social butterfly flutter it's wings ~~
exhausted

couldn't resist - a great socially extroverted haiku deep thought with smooth flow of words... fluttering...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Navada

Excellent

I really enjoyed the whimsical connection you drew between the beautiful insect and the human party animal! Quite often, they appear to be dressed similarly. :) You've added such beautiful artwork to accompany your words as usual and it really creates a sense of place appropriate to a social butterfly's typical surroundings.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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