Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter 21"A hidden past, a devastating truth.
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
What is the big secret I wonder? Unless of course I'm missing something. It's interesting how family events and things still occur around a whole world of drama. I'm interested to see how this whole thing plays out especially with the mysterious guy from the past. I like it I think it's a really good story. And I look forward to reading more! I have no issues with aesthetics consultation subject matter Or grammar, I think you've gotta find submission best of luck too I hope you haven't awesome night!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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What is the big secret I wonder? Unless of course I'm missing something. It's interesting how family events and things still occur around a whole world of drama. I'm interested to see how this whole thing plays out especially with the mysterious guy from the past. I like it I think it's a really good story. And I look forward to reading more! I have no issues with aesthetics consultation subject matter Or grammar, I think you've gotta find submission best of luck too I hope you haven't awesome night!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your story has gone back in time now as we will find out what has been going on in the past and how William fits into this story, I am looking forward to knowing more here.
It is hard for Mums to let go of their daughters as there are so many dangers in the world and you captured Mum's concerns perfectly here Jacob.
Another fine chapter Jacob, a joy to read, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Your story has gone back in time now as we will find out what has been going on in the past and how William fits into this story, I am looking forward to knowing more here.
It is hard for Mums to let go of their daughters as there are so many dangers in the world and you captured Mum's concerns perfectly here Jacob.
Another fine chapter Jacob, a joy to read, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you Dolly, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am guessing this is how she met William in the first place. It will be interesting to see how all this plays out. I am enjoying reading this story and you're doing a great job writing it.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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I am guessing this is how she met William in the first place. It will be interesting to see how all this plays out. I am enjoying reading this story and you're doing a great job writing it.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from karenina
It's nice, at this point, to take a step back and learn a bit about the younger Angie and her relationship with her parents and with Michelle. It appears up to this point she's never been in any trouble--perhaps has a mom who clings a tad tightly...
This may have kept her sheltered and not prepared for whatever it is that happened...
Michelle seems like she's a giant step ahead of Angie, and that's a bit of a worry!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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It's nice, at this point, to take a step back and learn a bit about the younger Angie and her relationship with her parents and with Michelle. It appears up to this point she's never been in any trouble--perhaps has a mom who clings a tad tightly...
This may have kept her sheltered and not prepared for whatever it is that happened...
Michelle seems like she's a giant step ahead of Angie, and that's a bit of a worry!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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You're most welcome!
Comment from BethShelby
This is good. Now you are stepping back into time so that maybe we will pick up on the missing pieces and find out what really happened and these friends in London. I see Angela has a mother who isn't really ready to let go.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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This is good. Now you are stepping back into time so that maybe we will pick up on the missing pieces and find out what really happened and these friends in London. I see Angela has a mother who isn't really ready to let go.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you Beth.