2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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5 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Haunting pic
Japanese poem
The fufillment of my dream
Couldn't help myself. Hope your turkey day was good. Your writing was real and involving. Karen
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Haunting pic
Japanese poem
The fufillment of my dream
Couldn't help myself. Hope your turkey day was good. Your writing was real and involving. Karen
Comment Written 24-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Karen. Mine was great ... I hope yours was too.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Lordinajamjar
Beautiful.
Very well done Gypsy, I really enjoyed your haiku.
This haiku resonates well and I really get it..sartori...
It is very well crafted.
John
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Beautiful.
Very well done Gypsy, I really enjoyed your haiku.
This haiku resonates well and I really get it..sartori...
It is very well crafted.
John
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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John,
Happy Thanksgiving Day! I'm so full LoL
I appreciate that you took the time to read my poem. Thank you for the exceptional six stars review.
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Comment from aryr
This was a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. Your words took the message to heart- the picture itself was of an old house with a down oak tree and empty nests. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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This was a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. Your words took the message to heart- the picture itself was of an old house with a down oak tree and empty nests. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Aryr,
Happy Thanksgiving Day! I'm so full LoL
I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
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Happy Thanksgiving to you!
Comment from shelley kaye
this has so many thoughts attached...
the tree - the house - bare branches
and finally an empty nest...
great haiku with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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this has so many thoughts attached...
the tree - the house - bare branches
and finally an empty nest...
great haiku with great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Shelley,
Happy Thanksgiving Day! I'm so full LoL
I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
doesn't this haiku conjure up a hollow feeling in one's gullet?
As you well know, I don't just read what seems to be apparent at first glance... no, knowing you, as I do, I dive deeper into the personification of forming my own interpretation as to how and what these haunting words may be relaying.
The strength and stability of wisdom left to die within abandonment as life leaves us with deep feelings of emptiness... dead branches with empty nests.
Makes you really think of all the things that happened during one's life to create such deep feelings, hey?
But in saying that, going all dark and melancholy... A beautifully crafted, composed and presented Haiku that really made me sit and ponder over.
And for a short form of poetry to do that, speaks volumes of its worth!
That house could be me?
With our thoughts we create...
cause and effect.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Hi MariVal,
doesn't this haiku conjure up a hollow feeling in one's gullet?
As you well know, I don't just read what seems to be apparent at first glance... no, knowing you, as I do, I dive deeper into the personification of forming my own interpretation as to how and what these haunting words may be relaying.
The strength and stability of wisdom left to die within abandonment as life leaves us with deep feelings of emptiness... dead branches with empty nests.
Makes you really think of all the things that happened during one's life to create such deep feelings, hey?
But in saying that, going all dark and melancholy... A beautifully crafted, composed and presented Haiku that really made me sit and ponder over.
And for a short form of poetry to do that, speaks volumes of its worth!
That house could be me?
With our thoughts we create...
cause and effect.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Hola, Carino,
Thank you, James, I love to read your reviews. I am happy this haiku made you ponder, that is what haiku is supposed to do. (*-*) Most of the time I don't even know where my inspiration comes from, but I always aim to write a good satori. It doesn't always happen.
James, our thanksgiving dinner was delicious and I am so full! LoL I wish I could send you and Jade some of it. We have lots of leftovers.
Muchos besos y abrazos,
MariVal
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Did you say left-over's!!!
Yummmmm... did you go traditional?
Is there cranberry sauce with that?
Really happy that your dinner was delicious... hope you had a relaxing, peaceful gathering... hmmmm, did I say peaceful? I meant joyful gathering. Lol.
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Very classic. Turkey, mash potatoes, jams, cranberry, stubeans, green beens, and pumpkin pie with whipped cream, everything cooked from scratch. My son in law does the cooking, he is a wonderful chef. I feel very grateful for my family and best friends, you and Helen. I'm happy and every night I give thanks for my daughter Micaela, her husband Nick, and my grandson Atticus.
Good night, James,
Con cariņo, tu amiga, Marival