Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter Eighteen"A hidden past, a devastating truth.
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Comment from eliz100
This is an excellent chapter. The hook at the end is great. I can not wait for the next chapter. There is an edit. The paragraph starts with, "She told me she would meet me." There is llford which I think you mean Chelmsford. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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This is an excellent chapter. The hook at the end is great. I can not wait for the next chapter. There is an edit. The paragraph starts with, "She told me she would meet me." There is llford which I think you mean Chelmsford. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from BethShelby
You know when to bow our right when things are about to get interesting and we been waiting of this meeting to occur. At least, we know Michelle is meeting her and she is at the right place. I guess I can wait fo the next post.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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You know when to bow our right when things are about to get interesting and we been waiting of this meeting to occur. At least, we know Michelle is meeting her and she is at the right place. I guess I can wait fo the next post.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you Beth.
Comment from BethShelby
You know when to bow our right when things are about to get interesting and we been waiting of this meeting to occur. At least, we know Michelle is meeting her and she is at the right place. I guess I can wait fo the next post.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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You know when to bow our right when things are about to get interesting and we been waiting of this meeting to occur. At least, we know Michelle is meeting her and she is at the right place. I guess I can wait fo the next post.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you Beth.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Oops, caught in the act. I wonder how this detective story will end. Will Angel find her piece of mind, or she will continue to search for the truth. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Oops, caught in the act. I wonder how this detective story will end. Will Angel find her piece of mind, or she will continue to search for the truth. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Oooooo. There's alot of not so good stuff moving behind the scenes! And you're a very good writer. I was well entertained. From beginning to end and I find the story to be quite thought provoking in the sense of who's doing what. Is I c no issues with aesthetics spelling or subject matterI wish you best of luck and a great day.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Oooooo. There's alot of not so good stuff moving behind the scenes! And you're a very good writer. I was well entertained. From beginning to end and I find the story to be quite thought provoking in the sense of who's doing what. Is I c no issues with aesthetics spelling or subject matterI wish you best of luck and a great day.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thank you Lea, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Why this place? What is going on with Michelle? It doesn't appear to be long lost friends. What happened to Caz? This is another good write.
'Well, just don't go spending too much,' he grins. (much.' He grins.)
'I'll see you tonight amigo. (tonight, amigo.)
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Why this place? What is going on with Michelle? It doesn't appear to be long lost friends. What happened to Caz? This is another good write.
'Well, just don't go spending too much,' he grins. (much.' He grins.)
'I'll see you tonight amigo. (tonight, amigo.)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from karenina
Oh... You did catch me up short! I was certain there would be some interaction between Angela and Michelle beyond "Hello Angela."
The story wasn't advanced much in this chapter.
A bit of a tease before a big puzzle piece falls into place?
We shall see!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Oh... You did catch me up short! I was certain there would be some interaction between Angela and Michelle beyond "Hello Angela."
The story wasn't advanced much in this chapter.
A bit of a tease before a big puzzle piece falls into place?
We shall see!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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You are welcome...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A short chapter this time and you left us up in the air as we are dying to know what Michelle thinks is going on. Although this one is short I enjoyed the calm exterior Angela displayed to Paul and I hope they can come together soon and make a good connection with each other, a fine post Jacob, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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A short chapter this time and you left us up in the air as we are dying to know what Michelle thinks is going on. Although this one is short I enjoyed the calm exterior Angela displayed to Paul and I hope they can come together soon and make a good connection with each other, a fine post Jacob, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thank you Dolly.